热点一:国庆 60 周年 热点一:
新中国成立 60 周年来,我国发生了翻天覆地的变化,请你据此写一篇 120 字的英语作文,谈谈 自己的感想。 要求:
  1. 列出生活中反映一两件家乡变化的事, 如购新车、住新房等。
  2. 列出最近发生的一两件国家大事, 如成功举办奥运、“神舟七号” 顺利升空等。
  3. 要表达出你的喜悦和自豪之情,并谈谈你的感想。
Great changes have taken place since our country was founded 60 years ago. In the past we lived in the small and old houses and now we move into new broad ones which are more than one hundred square meters. At the same time, many families have own their new cars. Besides, our country hosted the 29th Olympic Games successfully in 2008 and we took the first place in winning gold medals. Another inspiring event was that the Shenzhou Ⅶ was sent into space smoothly, which shows our scientific research get great achievements. We are very happy and proud of all these achievements. I am sure our country will become even stronger and richer. I love our motherland very much. Let’s work hard to make contribution to our country in the future.
我说的:周年纪念日类,首先抓住题目的明显要求的词汇,写作文的时候不能落下这 些要点,而且文中要出现明显体现这些要点的词汇。成立当年和如今的新中国,写变 化时要注意分清时态哦, 如文中 and 前后的动词。连接词:At the same time 与此 同时、Besides 另外、Another 另一个,其他的。定语从句也是一个亮点哦。
  1) 热点二:甲型流感:(1 :(
假如你是李华,你学校内有人得了猪流感,正在接受治疗,你校学生非常害怕,请你写一篇短 文谈谈如何预防猪流感?
  1. 平时外出戴口罩,少去人群集中的公共场所, 避免接触病人等。
  2. 勤洗手,保证充足睡眠,多锻炼多运动等。
  3. 词数: 120 字左右
  4. 文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 参考词汇: 猪流感 swine flu; 口罩 face mask.
Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. 开头 How do we protect us from it? We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the crowded place when you go out. We remember not to be in close contact with the patients infected with swine flu. On the other hand, the best way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make sure that you have enough sleep. At the same time, we should do more exercise so that we can build up our body. We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.
我说的:给的参考词汇一定千万要用进去!!!内容比较好写,如果你扯不出来,就 把要求的翻译下,然后扩的具体点就行。连接词:On the other hand,一般和 on one hand 连用;结尾最好有自己的观点或者想法建议之类的。
  2) 热点三:甲型流感:(2 :(
不同人都有着不同的习惯,个人习惯直接关系着公共卫生。请根据下列要求,写一篇 120 字的 英语短文,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
  1. 介绍有些人不同的好习惯和坏习惯。
  2. 习惯与卫生的关系:习惯是卫生基础; 不好的习惯,会导致一些传染疾病传播,如 AIDS, SARS, H1N1 流感等。
  3. 你的看法……。
It is generally believed that different people have different habits.开头 Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking, while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste things like alcohol and cigarettes. It goes without saying that there is close relationship between personal habits and public health. On the one hand, good habits serve as the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good habits, public health can’t be guaranteed. On the other hand, infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like AIDS, SARS, and H1N1 flu and so on. Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving personal habits and public health. If we mind our manners and behave ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future. 我说的:这类就是对比型的作文,一般分三段来写。第一段用了一句万能开头,第二 段具体介绍两种对比的具体不同,结尾发表你的看法,要阐明自己支持的观点!连接 词:while 然而,后面一般写与前面相反的论点、On the one hand On the 、 other hand 一方面,另一方面、Personally 就个人而言。
热点四:上海世博会 热点四:
2009 年 5 月 1 日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动,志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力 量。另外,志愿者或做家教,教小孩子阅读、算术,或打扫公园与街道,或到医院或疗养院帮忙。 你愿意做志愿者吗?请陈述理由写一篇 100 字左右的短文。
I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows: First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others’ help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What’s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it. In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.
我说的:首先说明你愿不愿意做志愿者(脑子没问题的都知道说愿意),题目要求说 理由,那就一点一点列,文中用了 First of all、Secondly、What’s more、More importantly 一系列连词层层递进,虽然不是很高级的词汇,但是让人看了很明朗的 感觉,一眼就知道你想要表达的内容。中间将题目要求的要点点出来,最后一个总 结,In summary,注意别写错,很好用的结尾词!O(∩_∩)O~
热点五:金融危机下大学生就业 热点五:
当今我国大学生就业成功率很低,除了全球性的金融危机影响外,还有就是大学生对工作的选择。 有的人认为应该优先选择自己喜欢的工作,而不是自己擅长的;另一部分人相反。你班学生就此事 进行讨论,请客观地介绍情况并谈谈你的看法。 观点 一部分人 喜欢比擅长重要。 另一部分 擅长比喜欢重要。 你 …… 理由 兴趣是最好的老师,精通与擅长的可能 性会大大增加等。 擅长更容易成功,后天努力培养兴趣。 ……
  1. 短文须包括所有要点, 可适度发挥。
  2. 开头已为你写好, 但不计人总词数。
  3. 词数:120 左 右。
Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic:开头 which is more important for college graduates to choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it? Some agree that the love of job is very important because interest is the best teacher. People are often willing to do what they like doing. If you are not good at it in the beginning, you can work hard and gradually improve your skills to make you good at it. Others hold their view that if you are good at it, you have more chances to achieve success very soon. While you work, you can do all you can to gain the interest in it little by little. From my point of view, I think we should make full use of our strengths to change them each other regardless of the fact that you like it or you are good at it. 我说的:又是典型的对比的文章,根据表格列出的写就好啦(说白了,你不会写就翻 译),多想出几个高级词汇,会让你的文章在老师眼前一亮,难以抵挡的魅力呀。老 办法分三段,From my point of view,就我的观点来说,长,显得高级,哈。
热点六:“快乐女声” 等选秀热 热点六: 快乐女声”
2009 年 “快乐女声” 的火爆已无需渲染。你对此现象进行简单的调查,结果如下: 有些人认为 “平民 平等参与,有机会一夜成名等”。也有些人认为 “快女” 中还存在一些不尽人意的地方, 如 “浪费时间 和精力,影响学习,产生一夜成名的不良志向 (bad ambition) 等”。请根据以上情况为 “无为论坛” 写 一篇报告并发表自己的观点。 注意:
  1. 包括以上全部要点可适当 发挥,使上下文连贯。
  2. 词数: 1
  3. 文章的格式和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
To: Wuwei Forum From: Li Hua Date: June 20, 2009 Subject: Super Girl Super Girl has already been very hot all over China since it started on May 7, 2009 in Beijing. We have had a survey about the phenomenon recently.开头 There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say Super Girl is their favorite. They hold their view that Super Girl can offer a stage for ordinary people to take part in it equally and have the chance of becoming famous overnight. While others think that Super Girl makes the girls waste time and energy so that it can have some bad effects on their study. In addition, it can cause some teenagers to have bad ambition about becoming famous overnight. From my point of view, it is wrong of young people to admire Super Girl too much, because they may mislead young people. I think to learn more and work hard is the real way to success.
我说的:这种利弊方面的文章开头可以套用一个谚语,a coin has two sides(我半 天才想起来,?啊~~),然后写信的格式,老师有讲过的吧,不会再去请教下。再 次提醒结尾写自己的观点,观点!
  1) 热点七:低碳经济下的环境保护(
“低碳经济”是一个具有广泛社会性的经济前沿理念,最早是在 2003 年英国政府发布的能源白皮书 《我们能源的未来:创建低碳经济》正式提出的。低碳经济包括低碳发展、低碳产业、低碳技术和 低碳生活等经济形态,是指在不影响经济发展的前提下,通过技术创新和制度创新,降低能源和资 源消耗,尽可能最大限度地减少温室气体和污染物的排放,实现减缓气候变化的目标,促进人类的 可持续发展。 Protection of Environment
  1. 目前环保还存在着许多问题。
  2. 为了保护环境,
  3. 各国政府做了大量的工作。
  4. 我的看法。 There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities. To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today. In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves. 这篇写得太长了,我看晕啦~~@_@
  2) 热点八:低碳经济下的环境保护(
  1. 情况。
  2. 原因。
  3. 后果。
  4. 措施。 词数 100~1
One day Sun Wukong together with his master and brothers was walking across river. Suddenly his master fell off the horse by the bad smell of river water. They found the water so dirty that they could hardly breathe. A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted. In this way most of the fish in the river were killed. If the river water all over the country is polluted like this, no living things will exist in the water. Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution. We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long. a
我说的:看图写作文,先看懂题目和图片主要要求,不要偏题,这篇明显是围绕环境 污染展开的。这篇写的还是蛮生动的,Sun Wukong,哈哈~
  3) 热点九:低碳经济下的环境



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