初中英语作文的修改
名词的单复数问题: 名词的单复数问题:

  1. …Joy found there was much fish in the lake. …Joy found there were many fish in the lake.
  2.The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fish. The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes.
  3.Many place are very dry. Many places are very dry.
主谓一致问题

  1. And now many rivers becomes very dirty. And now many rivers become very dirty.
  2. Everything are going very well. Everything is going very well.
  3. David with his little brother go to the park every Sunday. David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday
  4. There are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office. There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.
时态和语态问题

  1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They were all got wet. Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet.
  2. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last.
  3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in Yongan Park.
  4.The 29th Olympic Games will hold in China. The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China.
Chinglish 现象

  1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake. Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park.
  2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School. My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
行文的逻辑性问题

  1. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter with her mother’s help. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter.
  2. But she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into the river. She wasn’t careful, and she fell into the river.
词类错用

  1.When I was sadly, I played with it. When I was happily, I played with it. When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it.
  2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy. All of us are excited about it. Because it can make us happy and healthy.
典型病例
名词的单复数问题 主谓一致问题 时态和语态问题 Chinglish 现象 行文的逻辑性问题 词类错用
请你当老师
书面表达
自行车在北京仍然受欢迎,骑车上 自行车在北京仍然受欢迎, 学或上班都很方便。 学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多 的人……这使得 这使得……。骑车既可 的人 这使得 。 以……,又可以 ,又可以……。那么你更喜 。 欢哪种交通工具呢?为什么? 欢哪种交通工具呢?为什么?
请你当老师
Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them.
Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.
Bicycles are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to go to school or go to work by bike. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bikes. But I think that running cars makes air dirty. It is harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, I prefer to go to school by bike.
句子开头要大写,每句之后有标点; 句子开头要大写,每句之后有标点; 前句句末用逗号,后句开头用小写; 前句句末用逗号,后句开头用小写; 前句句末用句号,后句开头要大写; 前句句末用句号,后句开头要大写; 记住书写须清楚,因为里面有分数; 记住书写须清楚,因为里面有分数; 先草稿,后定稿,书写歌谣记牢靠。 先草稿,后定稿,书写歌谣记牢靠。
Homework
Write a composition: A letter to Mrs Zhang 今天, 今天,二中的张老师给你们上了一堂 英语作文课,她和你们一起讨论, 英语作文课,她和你们一起讨论,发现错 误并修改错误, 误并修改错误,教给你们写好作文的技巧 technique), (Writing technique),她的课对你们写 作能力的提高很有帮助。 作能力的提高很有帮助。请你给她写一封 感谢信。 感谢信。
 

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