2011 年英语四级作文范文:创建绿色校园 Create a Green Campus It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college. Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society. The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment. To begin with, the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable. Some of the authorities’ budget should be on how to reduce of the waste. What’ more, we’ better be aware of the seriousness s d of pollution around us. Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life. It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution, and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Certainly, there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses. 2011 年英语四级作文范文:免费参观博物馆 Free Admission to Museums? Nowadays, a lot of museums open to the public for free, and a lot of people are attracted to go there. However, it also brought some unexpected problems. At present, people can get knowledge from many ways like libraries, internet, and other sources. However, there is also much information that people cannot get from the above ways. Free admission museums supply more chances for the public to get knowledge that cannot be easily accessed. People can learn more things about history, art, science and so on. Although, this kind of policy brought much convenience to the public, it also caused some problems. For example, beggars and shabby-dressed people may enter the museums and cause bad reputation among the public; along with the increasing number of people getting into museums, there will be no enough service establishments to meet the requirements; besides, under the policy of free admission, the cultural relics displayed there may be inevitably broken or damaged by the crowds. Moreover, the crowds in the museums may also cause security problems. In my opinion, free admission is a good policy for the public, and it brings the public much convenience. But, we should also take possible measures to protect the cultural relics and maintain the order of spot. Besides, we can also take the policy of giving free admission first to children, then to the retired person, and last to the public. I think, this may help to solve the problems.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1)有的人喜欢独自旅行,有的人 喜欢与别人结伴而行
  2)两种旅行方式的好处
  3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式,为什么? Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?
行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。 提纲第 1 点指出两种不同的旅行方式, 提纲第 2 点要求分别 阐述两种旅行方式的好处,提纲第 3 点要求表明“我”的倾向,由此可判断本文应为对比选 择型作文。 根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好:有人喜欢独自 旅行,有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪 种旅行方式,并说明理由。 高分范文 Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? [1]When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. [2]Some people like to travel alone, [2]while others prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Of course, everyone has his consideration for his preference. [4]Traveling alone, one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring others. [3]Moreover, traveling alone [5]tend to bring the traveler [6]unexpected surprise, [7]such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. [8]Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. [3]For one thing, the group members can help and look after each other in the journey. [3]For another, [4]traveling with others who have same interest with, you can share costs and experiences with them. [9]As to me, I prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Firstly, we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. [3]Secondly, I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. [3]In sum, [10]both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one. 亮点点评 [1]“当涉及到或谈到…时” 。 [2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。 [3]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 [4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。 [5]“倾向,趋于” 。 [6]“意外的惊喜” 。 [7]表示列举。 [8]“和…相比” 。 [9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。 [10]“或者…,或者” 。 佳句临摩
  1.佳句:When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. 临摩:当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时,人们的看法各不相同。 .
  2.佳句:Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. 临摩:和城市相比,乡村的经济相对落后。 3>.
  3.佳句:Both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you
can find the pleasure from either one. 临摩:网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点,因此,我们应该将二者相结合。 . KEY:
  1. When it comes to whether we should cancel the “golden week” holiday, different people will offer different opinions.
  2. Compared with the cities, the countryside is relatively backward in economy.
  3. Both network teaching and traditional school teaching have their advantages. Therefore, we should combine these two teaching ways. 预测一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
  1. 现在大学校园里,迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象
  2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性
  3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it. 点评:2008 年元月三日,中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待;2008 年元月四日,中国政 法大学爆“杨帆门”事件;近几年,中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻 不断曝光,进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本预测题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作, 与校园生活密切相关。 预测二 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’ Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
  1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍
  2. 人们对其持不同态度
  3. 我的看法 Students’ Rating of Their Teachers Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become
the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.. This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion about their teachers’ effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students’ rating forms. Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for the teachers’ colleagues. I think students’ rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers’ performance. Instead of rating the teachers’ knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course, and to report on such things as a teacher’s ability to communicate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arouse students’ interest in the subject. 点评: 越来越多的高校采取让学生给老师打分的形式来了解教学反馈, 并以此作为促进 教学质量的有效手段。对此做法,管理部门及教学双方褒贬不一,看法迥异。本预测题为校 园生活热议话题,值得关注。 预测三 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
  1. 宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况;
  2. 一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性;
  3. 如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。 On a Harmonious Dormitory Life Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory can be disturbed in one way or another. As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together. There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you’ll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. Thirdly, you’ll have to share with each other and make good friends. In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life. 点评: “和谐”成为我们当今社会词频概率最高用词,就社会而言,倡导建立和谐社会; 就家庭而言, 提倡建设和谐家庭; 就校园来讲, 则要建立和谐校园; 和谐两字似乎无所不在, 大学生宿舍生活同样需要和谐。 本预测题与四级考试热点密切相关, 又为典型的校园生活主 题,值得关注。 预测四 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Brief Introduction to the University. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 假设你是一名学生志愿者, 要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。 内容应包括 学校历史、规模、教学现状以及未来目标等。
A Brief Introduction to the University Distinguished guests, Welcome to our university. Before you start to look around, allow me to give you a brief account of the school. Founded in 1927, our university is one of this city’s earliest universities of liberal arts. It is staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of over 10,000 students. In the past years, it has turned out numerous well-qualified students and found its graduates active in professions of all walks of life. Since its establishment, the university has always steered itself toward the objective that its students have an overall healthy development. Not only does it provide the students with basic academic courses, but it manages to expose them to the up-to-date knowledge. Besides, students are free to participate in colorful campus activities and social practice, which are intended for broadening their mind and developing their potential talent. Currently, both our faculty and students are making every effort to improve the quality of our education in the direction of a first-rate university. Thank you. 点评:近几年,随着我国顺利加入世贸组织以及经济全球化步伐的加快,许多国内高校 纷纷与国外大学合作办学, 教育走向国际化成为人们关注的热点, 也是大学生
 

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