作文实考题目预测(六)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Proposal for Blood Donation without Repayment on behalf of the Student Union. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

  1. 献血与健康的关系

  2. 无偿献血的意义
A Proposal for Blood Donation without Repayment
●审题概述●
无偿献血是个老生常谈的话题,按照要求要把文章写成一篇倡议书。我们要抓住的中心主线:首先告诉大家献血是安全的,无偿献血是每个人的责任,然后呼吁大家一起投入到这项有意义的活动中来。语言上要有很强的逻辑性,这样才能产生公信力和感召力。
第一段:开门见山,以学生会主席的名义号召大家献血;第二段:阐明少量献血无碍健康,消除一部分人的恐惧心理;第三段:告诉大家献血的意义;第四段:再次呼吁志愿者,并说明具体参与方式。
●范文●
Dear fellow students,
On behalf of the Student Union, I, the president, am earnestly ①calling for your active participation in our blood donation without repayment campaign. It is the duty of everyone in the society.
Probably some of you ②are concerned for the physical fitness if some blood is gone. While it is true that loss of too much blood is dangerous to one’s health, ③it doesn’t follow that donating a little blood is also harmful. As a matter of fact, donating a certain amount of blood helps promote metabolism.
I do hope you will cherish the opportunity to ④volunteer in our joint efforts in serving the society. If your little ⑤blood can pull back someone on the way to death, ⑥will there be anything that can make you even happier?
If you are healthy and ⑦ready to contribute to the noble cause, you may go to the blood donation center in our school hospital which will be open at every weekend from now on. Your kindness and generosity are really appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
The Student Union
◇第一段思路点评:
开头简明扼要,主题一目了然。
◇语言点提示:
①your active participation in类似于your share in。
◇第二段思路点评:
以对方的立场考虑问题,阐明献血安全性。
◇语言点提示:
②表示担忧的短语还有:are anxious for或are uneasy about等。
③it doesn’t follow that…也可用it doesn’t necessarily mean that…或it is not to say that…。
◇第三段思路点评:
巧妙引导,动之以情,发出号召。
◇语言点提示:
④此处volunteer in亦可代之以throw/fling yourself into。
⑤blood can pull back…拟人用法使行文跳出平淡。
⑥will there be…反问句式优于there will be nothing…自然留白,引人思考。
◇第四段思路点评:
介绍参与方式,结尾致谢增强亲和力。
◇语言点提示:
⑦ready to contribute to的替换短语还有:willing/happy to play your part in。
作文实考题目预测(七)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of children attending training courses. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

  1. 许多中小学生报名参加各种各样的培训班

  2. 家长和学生选择培训班时所考虑的主要因素

  3. 孩子参加培训班的益处和可能产生的弊端
On Children Attending Training Courses
●审题概述●
一看到作文题,很多人会想到中小学生成天穿梭于形形色色的培训班,周末和寒暑假几乎成了他们的“第三学期”。这些孩子没有机会享受人生中最美好的童趣时光。在谋局布篇时,我们可将这些素材梳理整合,然后按提纲组织文章。语言运用上,要强调逻辑性,并注意灵活使用短语和句型,可适当运用修辞手段。
第一段:用实例引出学生培训热的话题;第二段:详细分析人们选择培训班时所考虑的因素;第三段:评述参加培训班的好处和弊端。
●范文●
Every weekend sees Beibei, my neighbor and a primary school girl, rushing from a remedial English class to a piano training class. ①Beibei’s case is far from rare. As it is, numerous school children ②dedicate themselves to various training courses on weekends as well as during vacations.
When deciding what courses to attend, people ③are often inclined to choose those remedial courses,hoping that they may lead the children to ④score high, perform well and rank first at school. ⑤Along with the supplementary courses of school lessons go the artistic training courses which are believed to help child ⑥hold superiority over his peers.
The boom in training courses has both positive and negative sides. These courses contribute to the children’s preparations for their future careers to a certain extent. However, since most children enroll in the courses ⑦not out of their own interest, but out of their parents’ need, they are driven to study mechanically rather than to learn willingly. It may ⑧rob them of joy and fun to a point where they can see no childhood happiness, an experience ⑨no less essential than study. So ⑩it is vital that school children’s spare time be arranged in a sensible way.
◇第一段思路点评:
生动实例,导入主题。
◇语言点提示
①. 此句可改写为:Beibei’s case is anything but unique.
②. dedicate oneself to=occupy oneself with=commit oneself to
◇第二段思路点评:
层层分析,深入探讨 。
◇语言点提示:
③be inclined to do sth.=tend to do sth.=be apt to do sth.
④运用修辞手法,层进短语极具震撼力。
⑤倒装结构的拟人化使用,既保持句子平衡,又增添形象性。
⑥hold superiority over sb.=have/gain an edge over sb.
◇第三段思路点评:
总结利弊,首尾呼应。
◇语言点提示:
⑦并列短语前后语义对比鲜明,冲击力强。
⑧rob sb.of sth.=deprive sb.of sth.
to a point where意为to such an extent that
⑨no less…than=as…as…
⑩It is vital that…的虚拟语气用法。
作文实考题目预测(三)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition titled Practicing Tennis for Your Health. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
你是某网球健身俱乐部的宣传人员,需要向顾客介绍俱乐部的情况以吸收更多会员。内容应包括:

  1. 俱乐部简介

  2. 参加方法
Practicing Tennis for Your Health
●审题概述●
这是一篇商业性宣传稿。可以把各类健身俱乐部的宣传册子,校园里形形色色的俱乐部宣传海报作为参考。介绍中,突出俱乐部的优势。组织文章时,先对有兴趣入会的顾客表示热忱欢迎,然后具体介绍俱乐部的情况,最后说明申请成为会员的程序。措词造句要富于激情,有吸引力和说服力;句式丰富,生动活泼。
第一段:简单的开场白,欢迎大家来到网球俱乐部;第二段:介绍俱乐部的大致情况;第三段:说明参加方法。
●范文●
Dear friends,
Welcome to our tennis club to practice tennis for body-building. ①As is evidenced in many countries, health and fitness have become the primary concern of many people.
This is the very place where you can ②lose weight and keep fit, ③a comfortable place where you can escape from constraints of routine work, and an interesting place where you can make new friends of various types. We provide different tennis practicing programs to ④meet your needs. If you are a beginner, our first-class coaches will train you ⑤in person until you master the tennis skills. If you are already a good player, our top-grade drillmasters as well as other excellent club members will satisfy you in your practice. ⑥Armed with the latest tennis equipment and the best teaching team, our club is available any time ⑦upon demand.
Dear friends, now all you need to do is just fill out an application form and get a membership card. Join us and we are here⑧for you, for your health and for your better life.
◇第一段思路点评:
开门迎客,以大社会衬小环境。
◇语言点提示:
①As is evidenced是As引导非限制性定语从句的用法,此处也可用As is proved/shown。
◇第二段思路点评:
用排比句式介绍,尽显俱乐部魅力。
◇语言点提示:
②. lose weight的近义表达式:go on a diet。
③. escape from=be free of=find an outlet for
④. meet your needs=satisfy your requirements
▲两句If you are…对偶句协调平衡,富有美感;同时first-class coaches和top-grade drillmasters是同义表达,避免了单调的重复。
⑤in person与in body和in the flesh都可表示“亲自”;这里也可用face to face。
⑥. armed with=equipped with=furnished with
⑦. upon demand同义于whenever needed/necessary。
◇第三段思路点评:
简洁有力,呼应开头。
◇语言点提示:
⑧for you, for your health …层层递进,琅琅上口。
作文实考题目预测(四)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition titled Should University Students Rent Houses Off the Campus? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

  1. 越来越多的大学生在校外租房居住

  2. 人们对此看法不同

  3. 我认为…
feb ld University Students Rent Houses Off the Campus?
●审题概述●
这篇作文以在校大学生校外租房这一现象的长短处为主要内容,以我们自己的观点或评论作为结论,段落组织较为容易。在阐述两种不同观点时,可以联想自己身边在校外租房的同学,他们这么做大多是因为住学生宿舍不自由,或者宿舍条件太简陋。反对这种做法的人则认为这会导致学校管理上的混乱,同时也会增加那些学生家庭的经济负担。组织文章结构时可根据两种不同看法具体描述,然后两相权衡,明确表达自己的观点。语言方面要注意用词灵活多样,句式多变,自然流畅。
第一段:简单点题,引出话题;第二段:赞成大学生校外租房的人的看法;第三段:反对这种做法的人的观点;第四段:自己的倾向。
●范文●
Recent years have witnessed an increasing trend in university students’ renting houses off campus. It is no surprise that ①an army of college students move into the neighborhood housing around university campuses.
This idea of living off campus ②finds an echo among the students who believe it gives more freedom to them. As is natural, as far as school dormitories are concerned, students ③are confined to a small living circle. What’s more, student dormitories ④are hardly furnished with modern facilities such as TV sets and washrooms, which is simply inconvenient for the students.
Not everyone, however, ⑤shares this feeling. Those who view this phenomenon the other way round maintain that this practice may ⑥result in the chaos of the universities’ disciplining their students, who are still ⑦in the passage into maturity. In addition, it may also add extra financial burden to those students’ families.
As for me, I ⑧choose living off campus over staying on campus not only because it provides more freedom and allows more privacy, but because it helps present the world outside the ivory tower to the students.
◇第一段思路点评:
从事实出发,引出论题。
◇语言点提示:
①an army of的近义短语有:a multitude of和a great number of等。
◇第二段思路点评:
承接上文,论述一种观点,层次清晰。
◇语言点提示:
②find an echo among与appeal much to以及is embraced by同义。
③be confined to可用be restricted to替换。
④be furnished with=be supplied / equipped with
◇第三段思路点评:
话锋转折,自然过渡,引出另一看法。
◇语言点提示:
⑤share this feeling即agree to this idea, approve of this viewpoint或be of the same opinion。
⑥result in the chaos类似于lead to the disorder。
⑦in the passage into maturity可替换为:in a period of shaping themselves。
◇第四段思路点评:
亮出自己的观点,总结全文。
◇语言点提
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