t equal to a body without soul. A person with a stout body alone can go nowhere in the modern age of science and technology, a person's outward beauty is as easy to fade as a flower to wither no matter how colorful it is. It is true that health and beauty are something one may well be proud of. But it is of greater importance for a student to master adequate knowledge that is useful in his life-long service to the country. 句子相应规整一些,用词也尽量正式,以免出现不得当的笑话。 【评语】 全文围绕三个主题句展开议论, 条理清楚, 层次分明, 用词准确。 “well-developed muscles”, “proportioned figure”, “apply make-up”, “rouging lips”, “powdering faces”,“painting brows”,及“wearing earrings and necklaces”等词语搭配讲究, 生动地表达了作者的意思。“a person's outward beauty is as easy to fade as a flower to wither no matter how colorful it is.”比喻句用得贴切自然,很好地强调了主题。
【要求】 健康是革命的本钱,请以“health”为题目写篇 100 单词的英语小短文。每段的中 心句已经给出: Health is the foundation of one's future success. What should we do to maintain and enhance our health?
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Health is more important than wealth. 【范文】 Health
It is clear that health is the foundation of one's future success. If you become sick, it is nearly impossible to pursue your career effectively. On the other hand, if you are strong, you can go all out to overcome the obstacles that lie ahead of you. Now that we know that health is the source of our energy, what should we do to maintain and enhance our health? First, we should exercise every day to strengthen our muscles. Second, we should keep regular hours of our lives. If we get up early, we can breathe fresh air and see the sunrise, and this habit can do wonders for our outlook on life. Third, there is a proverb that says, “Prevention is better than cure.” In conclusion, health is more important than wealth. Those who are rich but lose their health are no more fortunate than those who are poor. If you want your wish to come true, health is the most important ingredient of your success. 【评语】 该文为行云流水,结构清楚而紧凑。开篇说明健康的重要性。在第二段里,分了三 个层次来阐释“健康是我们能量的源泉”,而且还有提问句来引导下面的回答。最后一段, “in conclusion”,总结了全文,而且有所提高。 Understand your health benefits and keep track of them.
【要求】 请以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句,写一篇题为“诚实”的文章。 It is usually better to be honest than dishonest. One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience. Honesty makes you happy and gain a good reputation. 【范文】
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honesty
We often praise somebody because of his diligence and honesty. So all the people think that honesty is a virtue and that it is the best policy. It is usually better to be honest than dishonest. People tend to believe an honest man, no matter what he does and what he says. On the contrary, dishonest people are not trustworthy. For this reason, honest people are always more successful than the dishonest. So it is better to be honest because it can help you succeed. One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience. If a person tells lies, his face will turn red and his heart will beat faster. He will always live in fright. Honesty makes you happy and gains a good reputation. All people consider what you've said true and trust you just because you are an honest man. Therefore, you can say what you like and do what you like without fear. You will feel very happy. Likewise, just because of your honesty, people respect you and love you. Gradually, you will gain a good reputation. To be honest will ensure you a happy life. 【评语】 该文内容切题,详略安排得当,重点放在诚实的益处,即第二段和第四段上。这两 段的段末均有一句总结句与段首的主题句相呼应,使段落结构完整,同时强化了主题。文 章语言略显单调,但比较顺畅,表达也较清楚。
【要求】 题目:How to Approach Money。请根据以下提示作文,要求以三句话作为段首语 结构文章。 Money is necessary in our modern life. But money is not all good. How should we approach money. 【范文】 How to Approach Money
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Money is necessary in our modern life. We need money to buy things such as food and clothing. When we go out, we should pay traffic fee and other fees. In a word, money is important. With more money, we can live better and create better working or studying conditions. But money is not always good. Many people work hard when they have no money but do nothing when they have more than enough money, And even worse, there are some people nowadays who make money at the expense of friendship or other people's interests. How should we approach money, then? In my opinion, we should work hard to earn more money, But at the same time, we must remember that money is not our final goal. 【评语】 本文为一给起首句的作文,所以内容限制很大,个人发挥余地较小。本文优点在于 简练地评论了金钱的利与弊,逻辑清楚。此类文章写作起来比较容易。
【要求】 题目:暑假两个月的漫长假期为紧张学习的同学们提供了空闲娱乐、实践锻炼的好机会。 你将怎样安排你的暑假生活?请以“How to Spend the Summer Vacation”为题,写一篇 100 个单词左右的英语短文。 写出你安排暑假的活动和选择这些活动的理由。 【范文】 How to Spend the Summer Vacation
In school, we have summer vacation. In summer, the weather is so hot that our brain needs a rest after a period of hard work. Thus it is for health reasons that we have our summer vacation. What would be the most healthy way to spend it then? There are many kinds of sports, which are good for health in summer, such as swimming, tennis and baseball. But care should be taken not to practice such sports all day long, which would be very bad for our health.
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Another point we have to consider is that our time should not be spent entirely in playing. We attend school in order to get some knowledge, which will be useful in our life. But knowledge can only be obtained through constant drilling. During the vacation, we should not neglect to review the lessons we have learnt. It is true that all work and no play makes you a dull fellow. Though there may be other ways to spend the summer vacation, this seems to me the best of all. 【评语】 文章首先从暑假的必要性开始,在第二段里又用问句来承上启下,提出本文的中心 意思:“我们怎么才能最好地利用暑假的时间呢?”并说明运动是一个很好的选择,但是, 第三段又说明还要学习以增长知识。 回答“怎么样”的时候往往要阐述“为什么”,才显得理直气壮。
【要求】 每个人的生活中都有过失败的经历,失败对于我们来说,到底意味着什么?请你按如下提 纲写一篇文章,谈谈你对失败的理解。 失败是生活中的常事。 人们对失败的态度各不相同。 就我而言,我认为失败www.tesoon.com 【范文】 Is Failure a Bad Thing
Failure is quite a common thing in our life. As long as we do things we will surely encounter difficulties. Of course we should try our best to get over them, but in many cases, it is not so easy, or even impossible. Then how should we face failure? Different people take different attitudes towards failure. When faced with failure, some people become frustrated and lose their selfconfidence. They refuse to make any further efforts. These people will probably never amount to anything in life. Some people just don't fear failure. They firmly believe that failure is the mother of success. As a result, not only can failure stop them, but they draw useful lessons from it and try even harder. Such people are sure to succeed someday.
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As for me, I don't think failure is a bad thing. Failure can never discourage me but only enrich my experience and steel my will. With this positive attitude in mind, I will try hard in anything I'm determined to accomplish and attain success in the end. 【评语】 本文按题目所给纲要分为三段。首段简要地论述了失败是每个人都会遇到的,末句 用了一句设问,起到了承上启下的作用。第二段谈到了人们对失败的两种典型态度,先写 错误观点进行铺垫,而后再写正确观点。这种安排自然突出了作者所赞同的态度,同时为 引出第三段做好的了准备。末段作者则阐明了自己的观点。全文层次清楚,段落间衔接紧 密而自然,主题突出,语言流畅,用词准确。 【要求】 失败,是人人都不愿体验的结果。有人说失败使人消沉,有人说失败是成功之母。你对失 败的态度怎样?写一篇短文。 字数 150?200 字,题目自拟。 【范文】 Is Failure a Bad Thing?
Failure is a common thing in our daily lives. As students, We sometimes fail to get high scores on our examinations. When we play game, we sometimes can't avoid losing to others. And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work. All these failures happen naturally and almost every one of us has had such experiences. However, there are different attitudes towards failure. Some people lose heart in failure, they think the world has come to an end. Some people don't take failure seriously and just ignore it, while some others learn much from it. In my opinion, what really counts is not failure itself, but what we think of failure and do after failure. As long as we believe in ourselves and don't give up, and in the mean time learn something from our failure, We'll certainly be successful in the end. So I'm never afraid of failure, for I believe that failure is not a bad thing, but the mother of success. 看问题一定要看到正反两面,体现在文中,就往往是鲜明的对比。 【评语】
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表达思想清楚,内容比较充实,文字流畅,句子结构多样。第一段、第二段主题句 简练而贴切,句间衔接比较自然,用词造句有不少闪光点,如:the world has come to an end 等。
题目:爱是人类普遍而伟大的感情,请以“love”为题,写一篇 100 单词左右的英语小短 文。文章每一段的前一句话已经给出。 Love plays an important part in this world today. The love between you and your parents is a specials love. There are other kinds of love. 【范文】 Love
Love plays an important part in this world today. With the increasing modernization of society, relationship between people are becoming looser and looser. It is difficult to imagine what they would be like if there were no love for each other. Love is the caring and concern for, and understanding of other people and the acceptance of their strength and weaknesses. To love and to be loved is the true happiness in life. The love between you and your parents is a special one. This love, as any other sincere love, must be honest and be shared by both parents and children. The love of parents is a great support in their children's lives. It will remain with them and help them overcome all the difficulties and make them feel secure. There are other kinds of love. Love between friends, partners, human beings and animals. The power of love makes us endure the difficulties in our lives, even though we may not have the chance to think about it, it maybe be kept alive deeply in our heart. 【评语】 该文逻辑清晰, 词语简练, 先从“爱”的普遍意义谈起, 说到“爱”的含义, “爱” 对我们的重要。在第二段里又重点地谈了谈父母和孩子之间的“爱”,然后结尾处点到了 其他种类的“爱”。有序有节,完整精干。 并不是好文章必须追求艰涩的词语, 平易的语言只要运用得当, 也会有极好的效果。
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坚强的意志(Man's Strong Will)请以下面三句分别作为三段段首的主题句,写一篇以坚 强的意志为题的文章。 Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality. There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will. It is not easy to cultivate a strong will. 【范文】 Man's Strong Will
Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality. It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship that befalls. It is strong will that enables us to endure the trying situation and to attain our goals. Strong will gives us light when we are in the dark, and encouragement when we are frustrated. With this meritorious quality, no enemy can overwhelm us, and no obstacl
 

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