图表作文
这种作文形式是在给出标题的同时, 这种作文形式是在给出标题的同时, 给出图表,并附以提纲提示。 给出图表,并附以提纲提示。图表作文 一般要求考生对图表中相关数据进行描 述和评论,并得出合乎逻辑的结论。 述和评论,并得出合乎逻辑的结论。这 种写作形式是一种数据, 种写作形式是一种数据,形象信息转化 为文字信息的过程。写作时, 为文字信息的过程。写作时,考生可采 用先描述后议论或夹叙夹议的方法。 用先描述后议论或夹叙夹议的方法。叙 述一般在为议论大基础。所以, 述一般在为议论大基础。所以, 除了 直接引用表中有关典型数据外, 直接引用表中有关典型数据外, 有必 要做些简单计算, 要做些简单计算, 切记毫无目的地引 用表中过多或全部的数据。 用表中过多或全部的数据。
1986
year food
1987
1988
1989
1990
Grain Milk Meat
Fruit and vegetable
49% 10% 17% 24% 100%
47% 11% 20% 22% 100%

  46.5% 11%
  22.5% 20%
45% 12% 23% 20%
45% 13% 21% 21%
Total
100% 100% 100%
Directions: ? For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on Changes in People’s Diet. Study the following table carefully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. Write three paragraphs to: ?
  1. state the changes in people’s diet in the past five years. ?
  2. give possible reasons for the changes. ?
  3. draw your own conclusions. ?
  4. You should quote as few figures as possible.
1986
year food
1987
1988
1989
1990
Grain Milk Meat
Fruit and vegetable
49% 10% 17% 24% 100%
47% 11% 20% 22% 100%

  46.5% 11%
  22.5% 20%
45% 12% 23% 20%
45% 13% 21% 21%
Total
100% 100% 100%
Changes in People’s Diet ? In the past five years, some changes have
taken place in people’s diet. The proportion of grain which is the main food for Chinese people has decreased by 4%. On the contrary, the proportion of milk and meat in people’s diet has increased. ? These changes in people’s diet show some changes in people’s living standard and life style. Since China began her economic reform in 1978, various kinds of food have appeared in the market. Milk and meat, which were seldom seen on people’s dinner table before, have now become popular food in many Chinese families.
As the living standard of the Chinese people is rising, we look forward to a further change in people’s diet. In the future, the proportion of milk and meat is likely to go on increasing, so is the percentage of fruit and vegetables.
某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查, 某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查 结果 如下.根据图表 根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天 如下 根据图表 提供的信息描述学生每天 的课余活动,并针对图表 并针对图表2中任何一个数据 的课余活动 并针对图表 中任何一个数据 所反映的情况写出你的一个看法. 所反映的情况写出你的一个看法
Chart I shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time 93 minutes into their homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.
As is shown in Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic.
? 2002年全国高考上海英语试卷 2002年全国高考上海英语试卷 ? Guided Writing
? Write an English composition in over 120 words based on the picture on the picture and the instructions given below.
简要描述图片内容, 简要描述图片内容,结合 生活实际, 生活实际,就图片的主题 谈谈自己的感想. 谈谈自己的感想.
In the picture, we can see that the girl’s parents and her grand mother are helping the girl, which makes it impossible for the girl to ride bicycle on herself. What is more ridiculous, her mother even takes some medicine. ? In fact, this is not a picture just for fun. It tells us that parents shouldn’t help their children too much. They should let their children be more independent. ? Many parents share the opinion that they must get every thing ready for their children so that their children could put more emphasis on their study.
?
? They all failed to consider that with help of this kind, children won’t be able to live their own life without their parents in the future. Nowadays, It is often reported that a certain college student don’t know how to wash her socks! How can she compete with others after graduation? ? Love and attention is needed in the growth of a child, but it should never be too much or you’ll spoil the child and he will accomplish nothing in his life.
考生作文评析
? 本文内容较充实,详略得当.能根据 本文内容较充实,详略得当. 写作要求,简要描述了图片内容, 写作要求,简要描述了图片内容,并能结 合生活中的实例,谈出自己的感想. 合生活中的实例,谈出自己的感想. ? 具有较好的语言表达能力. 具有较好的语言表达能力.虽然有些 语法错误, 但全文流畅,结构合理, 语法错误, 但全文流畅,结构合理, 句型较多样,词汇较丰富. 句型较多样,词汇较丰富.
? The graph shows the rise and fall in the number of car accidents in Walton City in 19
  90. From January to
March it increased by 68%, from March to June it dropped by about half the previous rate; and from June to August there was a steep rise of
  66.5%. After that, however, there was a steady decrease, and this makes us optimistic that car accidents are declining in Walton City.
The figures shown above indicate a great progress in the health conditions of developing countries. They are also the evidence
of both rising living standard and life span. If this trend continues, developing countries will soon approach the developed countries in terms of health care.
Chinese farmers have enjoyed a steady increase in personal incomes since 19
  78. According to the graph,
the average earnings of the Chinese farmers in 1978 were very low, only about RMB1
  50. However, in 1982, their average income almost doubled to reach RMB2
  80. Since then their yearly income steadily increased, and in 1998, it was on the average RMB1200, increasing by 800%, compared with the level of 19
  78.
参考结构 1
Some people think that 观点1 观点1 . They claim that 理由1 理由1 . What’s more, 理由2. 理由2 But 观点2 as other people 观点2 may believe. Although 条件限制 条件限制, still理由 still理由. 理由. However, each of them has its own disadvantages. 观点1缺点 观点1缺点, while 观点2缺点. 观点2缺点 In case of myself, I prefer to 我的观 理由. 点 because 理由
参考结构 2
Nowadays, 主题 主题 becomes popular in our daily lives. But 提出质疑 ? Generally, there are two opinions toward it. One opinion is that 第 一种看法 because 理由 理由. 一种看法 The other is 第二种看法 第二种看法. People who hold it argue that 理由1, so 理由1 理由2 理由2. In conclusion, I may say that 我的看法 . Because 理由 理由. So 总结 .
 

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