Pay attention to the following instructions when writing.

  1.要点齐全 要点齐全
  2.语言正确 语言正确
  3.表达生动 表达生动
  4.行文流畅 行文流畅
  5.适当发挥 适当发挥
专题复习:书面表达训练之三 专题复习:
如何使句子优美 如何使文章流畅
宝应县中学高三英语备课组
Sample 1 The students like to choose majors . They can learn interesting things . They will have good jobs in the future. The students believe that the environment is important to us . They graduate from universities .They can find good jobs. They can get much money. I think students should go to a good university . We like it and we study hard at it.
Sample 2
Some students prefer to choose majors so that they can learn what they are interested in . It will also make it possible for them to have their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believe that the environment is important to one’s development and that graduates from leading universities are often likely to find a good job.
Sample 2
Some students prefer to choose majors so that they can learn what they are interested in . It will also what they are interested in make it possible for them to have their favorite jobs in make it possible for them to have the future. However, those who think differently believe that the those who think differently believe that environment is important to one’s development and that graduates from leading universities are often likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is a good major at a good university. If we can’t obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where no matter where we study , we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.
Elegance (语 言优美) 言优美)
Coherence 行文连贯) (行文连贯)
句式多变化 作文更优美
怎样使句式多变语言优美呢? 怎样使句式多变语言优美呢? 怎样用不同的表达方式表示相同的意义 怎样通过对句子结构的变化,使文章显得 怎样通过对句子结构的变化 使文章显得 更加丰富多彩 怎样运用高级词汇, 怎样运用高级词汇,给文章增加亮点

  1.What surprised me most was that he didn't know me at all. → = It surprised me that he didn't know me at all. = To my great surprise , he didn't know me at all.

  2.Too many people to the zoo will cause traffic jam . Too many people to the zoo will lead to traffic jam . result in Too many people to the zoo will traffic jam .

  3.The man didn't know what he should do next. what to =The man didn't know next. do
  4.Hurry up, or you'll miss the train. =You won't catch the train you if hurry. don’t unless =You will miss the train you hurry.

  5.虽然他是个孩子,但他懂得很多.(一句多译) 虽然他是个孩子,但他懂得很多. 虽然他是个孩子
  1) Although/ Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child as (though) he is , he knows a lot.
  2)

  6.这本书是如此的有趣,以致于我读了一遍又一遍。 这本书是如此的有趣,以致于我读了一遍又一遍。 这本书是如此的有趣
  1) it This book was so interesting that I read again and again.
  2)I This was such an interesting book that read it again and again.
  3) This was so interesting a book that I read it again and again. So interesting was this book that I
  4) read it again and again.

  7.The teacher took a book in his hand and came into the classroom. = The teacher came into the classroom, with . a book in his hand (用with的复合结构) = The teacher came into the classroom, book hand in . (用独立结构)
句子开头的变化
  1. The boy was surprised at what he had seen , he stood there and couldn’t say a word. Surprised at = what he had seen, the unable to say boy stood there , a word. (形容词做状语 形容词做状语) 形容词做状语

  2.I didn't realize my mistake until you pointed it out. →
It was = not until you pointed it out that I realized my mistake.(强调句型) 强调句型) 强调句型 Not until = you pointed it out did I realize my mistake.(倒装句) (倒装句)

  3.You are sure to succeed only by . working hard. Only by working hard are you = sure to succeed. (only +状语提前 状语提前) 状语提前

  4. We all know that he is honest. = It is known to us all that he is honest. (It做形式主语 做形式主语) 做形式主语 = As is known to all , he is honest .(as引 引 导的非限制性定语从句) 导的非限制性定语从句

  5. I passed the physics exam with your help.
thanks to
  1).I passed the exam your help

  2).I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for our help.
  3).I couldn’t have passed the physics your without exam help.

  1.They believe a public park should be free . They believe a public park should free of charge be .

  2. The railway in our county is being built. under . The railway in our county is construction

  3. We think the meeting is very important . of = We hold that the meeting is the view great importance .

  4.The result is not satisfying at all. far from =The result is satisfying
欣 赏 一 下 Some people claim that reading selectively is more helpful, since they believe that reading without choice is a waste of time.However,some other people argue that we should read extensively, for they hold the view that in such a rapid developing society, we need to enlarge the range of our knowledge instead of restricting it to one or two fields. In my opinion, both sides are going to extremes.
起承转合好 作文更流畅
Task 1
在下列句子空白处 填入恰当的过渡用语, 填入恰当的过渡用语 使行文连贯流畅。 使行文连贯流畅。

  1) I don’t want to go. Besides , I have something important to do.
  2) I’d like to come, but I’m afraid I can’t.
  3) Lucy is twelve and Lily is eleven; therefore, Lucy is one year older than Lily.
  4) Some people waste food while others don’t have enough.
Task 2 在下面短文空白处 填入恰当的过渡用语, 填入恰当的过渡用语 使行文连贯流畅. 使行文连贯流畅
However , In a word, Besides that, But
A lot of people smoke. They say that smoking can But bring them happiness. I am strongly against smoking. Maybe smoking can give people a little pleasure. , However it brings much more harm to people’s health. Every year many people die from smoking-related diseases. Besides that smoking is also one of the , causes of pollution.
In a word , I am strongly against smoking and I call on all the people to do something about it.
Task 3
在文中需要的地方 加上合适的过渡用语, 加上合适的过渡用语, 使行文连贯流畅。 使行文连贯流畅。
At the beginning,
However
And then so that
May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. The salesgirl In a word treated me coldly. She didn’t admit the coat was sold in her shop. She said that I made it dirty. She gave various excuses to refuse my Just request. I got angry.I quarreled with her. then/Just at The manager turned up. He asked what that moment was the matter. He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized(批评)the (批评) salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. After I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.
So At last (In the end ),
May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I However bought yesterday. ,the salesgirl treated me coldly. At the beginning ,she didn’t admit the coat was , sold in her shop. ,She said that I made it dirty. And then, ,She gave various excuses to refuse my In a word , I got so angry that request. I quarreled with her. Just at that moment , the manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. he knew As soon as/ The moment all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批评 批评) 批评 the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.
如何使书面表达更加 优美流畅?

  1.学会不同方式表达 学会不同方式表达
Elegance

  2.注意句式结构变化 注意句式结构变化
  3.适当使用高级词汇 适当使用高级词汇
Coherence

  4.合理使用连接用语 合理使用连接用语
Practice makes perfect!
Make our writing better
Let’s begin
书面表达: 书面表达 Sample 1
Sample 2 Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 19
  78. People here ③ live a better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.
Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! ① This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 19
  78. People here ③ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
In the past, the school here was very small⑤and most children had no money. ⑥ Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦ The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys ⑧. It is the most . beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.
In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and the newly built teaching building ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education. Thank you.
Next period we’ll discuss how to express your own opinions in your composition. If you want to know more, please search: www.kjcenter.net@1
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Every student will be faced with the same question when he passes the college Entrance Examination: Should he choose a good major a good university? Different people will offer different answers. Some students give priority to a good major. What they cherish is specialty they like most. In their mind, whether the university is famous is not very important so long as he works hard, he can learn it well in any university and a bright future is awaiting him.
Other students pay more attention to the university. They attach great importance to the university because the environment is vital to the making of an excellent person and is the symbol of a good future job itself. How can you have a wide vision and broad horizon if you receive education in a small college? In a word, the best choice is a good university. We can only get such a chance after making great efforts. If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major itself. ( give priority to 表示“优先考虑” ,cherish 表示“优先考虑” 珍爱,珍惜, 重视) 珍爱,珍惜,attach importance to重视) 重视
 

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