范文讲评:旅游事业 「要求」 要求:旅游事业对我国具有举足轻重的作用。请以 Ways to Improve China’s Tourism 为 题为我国旅游事业的发展提几点建议。 (提示: 扩大宣传, 改善旅游设施, 提高服务质量……) 「范文」 Ways to Improve china’s tourism Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world. However, tourism in China is not as developed as it should be. If the following is done,China’s tourism will definitely be improved. First,our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists. Second,facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip. Finally,the quality of service should be improved. Don’t tell people their ideas are bad unless you’ve got a good one. 「评语」 本文第一段提出问题,第二段解决问题, “first”“second”“finally”等词的使用,使 , , 整篇文章条理格外清晰。 范文讲评:如何利用空余时间 「要求」 题目:你将参加校园英语讲演比赛。现在需要写出一份简要的底稿,底稿应包含以下基 本要点。 随着工作时间的缩短,空余时间越来越多了。 如何利用空余时间。 利用空余时间的益处。 题目自拟。 「范文」 Use of Free Time Some people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment,but it would be hard to find such people in contemporary times. Working hours are shorter and vacations longer,and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends. Aside from eating and sleeping,what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school? Use of free time often discloses much about one’ tastes, s values, interests and personality. What may be one man’s leisure,however,might be another man’s work. In leisure hours, some may turn to the humanities: literature, magic, and here we might also mention movies art and television. Others participate in sports,politics,voluntary work or hobbies at home. Still others like parties,travelling,or just loafing. Obviously, use of free time is a good means of relaxation, its benefits go beyond this. the but All things people do in leisure hours enable them to gratify their wishes. This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as well. So the good use of free time will make life rich,colorful and rewarding. 「评语」 这篇文章写得很有水平。说理深入浅出,语言丰富晓畅,例证详实,句式灵活多变,使 得文章生动并吸引人。开篇用问句,引出下文;结尾点题,总结全文。并且很有文学性。
范文讲评:旅行 「要求」 暑假就要到了,许多同学都会选择旅游作为度假的一种方式。的确,旅游对一个人的身 心健康颇有好处。 那么就请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句, 写一篇旅游的文章。 Travel is a very good means of broadening a person’s perspective. Travel may relieve a person of boredom and gloom. Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. 「范文」 Travel Travel is a very good means of broadening a person’s perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures,meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much,you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences,but also be aware of the vastness of nature. Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience,which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later, you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences,thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind. The field’s his study,nature was his book. Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are less expensive,but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle,which,although slow,can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature. 「评语」 本文首先陈述了旅游能够开阔人们眼界的原因, 接着指出为什么旅游能够消除烦闷、 抑 郁的心情,最后说明进行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的优缺点。本篇各段解释言简意明,主 题突出。 come into contact with…” enrich you knowledge and experiences” be aware of the “ , “ , “ vastness of nature”“disperse your boredom”“broaden your mind”等词语的恰当搭配,生 , , 动而准确地表现出了旅游的益处。 范文:大型企业和小型企业 Large Companies and Small Companies Directions: Write a composition on the topic Large Companies and Small Companies in thirty minutes. You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)below.
  1.大学毕业后有的人希望在大公司工作。
  2.有的人则认为在小公司工作更能锻炼人。
  3.我的看法。 参考范文: Large Companies and Small Companies Upon graduation from college,young men and women face the first choice in their career life:to go to a large company or a small one? Although many graduates are attracted by the prestige of large companies, believe the small one will afford more chances of success and more I
1037 tunities to develop your ability. There are two basic differences between the large and small enterprises. First,working in the small company you operate primarily through personal contacts;you have more chance to develop your communication ability and the ability to handle various kinds of personalities. In contrast,in the large company there are established policies and fairly rigid procedures. Even the man at the top is only a cog in a big machine: you needn’t make any decision and can’t see the effect of your work…… Second,in a small business you are normally exposed to all kinds of experiences and expected to do a great many things without too much help or guidance. Thus,you may acquire much more skills and experience, develop the ability to handle different, and complicated things. But in the large corporation,since you are normally taught one thing and limited to one procedure,you may become the man who knows more and more about less and less. Obviously if you want to gain more experience and ability needed in business organizations and to become an excellent manager or executive in your future career,working in a small company is your best choice. 范文:名人隐私 Privacy of Famous People Directions: you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay no less than 120 words on the following topic. Newspapers and magazines have special interest in the private lives of famous people. What can you explain it? What effect it will have on the people being exposed? And what is your opinion of it? 范文: Privacy of Famous People In recent years,many newspapers and magazines focus on the activities of film stars, pop singers and some other famous men and women. Reporters disguise their identities, infiltrate the subject’ business and family, even bug and wiretap them??to get the news by s or whatever means are necessary. It is not difficult to explain the reason for their surprising amount of interest in famous people’s lives. They are in the spotlight,renowned or notorious,they are the topic of ordinary people who like to know everything about them. To satisfy their curiosity, “the people’ right or s to know” ,journalists often find it their duty to report their activities. More over,what matters to a newspaper or a magazine is the number of readers. A large readership means the rise in the circulation of their publications,hence a huge profit. Since film stars and pop singers are newsworthy figures,and their stories draws far more attention than those of other people,it is natural that the press tries to attract them to buy their magazines by featuring private lives of famous people. How ever,those exposed people can be severely injured by such press attention. Sensational stories about their private lives cause great unhappiness to them. To escape reporters,they can’t even lead a normal life. Sometimes their lives will be in danger. For example,Princess Diana died in a car accident as she attempted to escape photographers in a chase through Paris. Famous people are also citizens. They have the right to keep their own privacy like
ordinary people??the basic right which should be respected,protected and guaranteed by our laws in whatever circumstances. 范文:给校长的一封信 A Letter to the University President Direction:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: letter to the university president about the canteen service on campus, should write A you at least 100 words,and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李伟, 请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写了一封信, 内容涉及食堂的饭菜质 量、价格、环境、服务等等,可以是表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。 参考范文: January 11th,2003 Dear Mr. President, As a regular student at our college,I have some complaint to make about the canteen service on campus. Firstly,the canteen environment is very bad. Actually,it is becoming more and more crowded and noisy with an ever larger presence of vocational students every term. Secondly , the canteen workers are bad-mannered. Far from being warm and kind-hearted,they always seem to be cold and rude to us students. Thirdly and most importantly, dishes at our canteen are too expensive, the though they are by no means good quality or delicious. The survey the Student Union carried out last week reveals that on average a student will spend 10 to 12 yuan on meals every day. This is for more than the food expenses of students in the neighborhood colleges. Nutritious and delicious meals well within the students’means are very important for young students. I really wish measures could be taken to improve our canteen service. 范文:知识和经验 Knowledge or Experience Directions:You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.
  1.some emphasize book knowledge
  2.others stress practical experience
  3.which one is more important?Give your reasons to illustrate your opinion. 范文: Which is more important in life,knowledge from the books you read,or personal experience you gain in reality?The answer may vary from person to person. The young, educated may emphasize the former, the old may stress the later. But in my opinion, and they are of the same importance. Experience is priceless. How to become an efficient secretary?How to prepare for your first child to come into the world?There is so much experience we need in careers,in life and even in academic studies. It helps one deal with the problems with ease and confidence. Especially activities and to accumulate experience of different kinds is more crucial. Experience,however,is limited in terms of time and space. For one thing,it is impossible for anyone to experience all the important events and meet all the famous people. For another,as the speed with which skills are obsolete and new problems crop up is unprecedented because of the fast development of society,experience is far less adequate.
Depending too much on it only leads to narrow-mindedness and prejudice. One way to compensate for it is to read books. Books of various kinds can bring us almost unlimited additional experience. From books you can not only trace back to the wisdom of our antecedents,but keep up with the latest developments of science and technology. To be sure,it's secondhand experience. But it is the ideal supplement to our own limited experience. Few of us can travel around the world,or live long beyond one hundred years,but all of us can live many lives by reading books. Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential. While experience makes one more resourceful,book knowledge makes one more learned. 范文:出国学习 Going abroad for studies Directions:You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.
  1.Going abroad for studies costs a large sum of money.
  2. But even so it attracts many young people.
  3.Do you like to join them if you have an opportunity?why?Give your reasons. 范文: Going abroad for Studies The other day I announced that I would go abroad for further studies right after my college education. My decision evoked the immediate objection of my family:Why?Why should I borrow a huge sum of money for overseas studies while I might receive the same education at home at relatively low cost? My answer is: addition to knowledge, can gain experience that in I those who stay at home will never have. First,experience is the opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages. While a person can study a foreign la
 

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