范文讲评:旅游事业
  「要求」
  要求:旅游事业对我国具有举足轻重的作用。请以Ways to Improve China’s Tourism为题为我国旅游事业的发展提几点建议。(提示:扩大宣传,改善旅游设施,提高服务质量……)
  「范文」
  Ways to Improve china’s tourism
  Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world. However,tourism in China is not as developed as it should be. If the following is done,China’s tourism will definitely be improved.
  First,our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists. Second,facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip. Finally,the quality of service should be improved.
  Don’t tell people their ideas are bad unless you’ve got a good one.
  「评语」
  本文第一段提出问题,第二段解决问题,“first”,“second”,“finally”等词的使用,使整篇文章条理格外清晰。
范文讲评:如何利用空余时间
  「要求」
  题目:你将参加校园英语讲演比赛。现在需要写出一份简要的底稿,底稿应包含以下基本要点。
  随着工作时间的缩短,空余时间越来越多了。
  如何利用空余时间。
  利用空余时间的益处。
  题目自拟。
  「范文」
  Use of Free Time
  Some people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment,but it would be hard to find such people in contemporary times. Working hours are shorter and vacations longer,and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends. Aside from eating and sleeping,what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school?
  Use of free time often discloses much about one’s tastes,values,interests and personality. What may be one man’s leisure,however,might be another man’s work. In leisure hours,some may turn to the humanities:literature,magic,art and here we might also mention movies and television. Others participate in sports,politics,voluntary work or hobbies at home. Still others like parties,travelling,or just loafing.
  Obviously,the use of free time is a good means of relaxation,but its benefits go beyond this. All things people do in leisure hours enable them to gratify their wishes. This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as well.
  So the good use of free time will make life rich,colorful and rewarding.
  「评语」
  这篇文章写得很有水平。说理深入浅出,语言丰富晓畅,例证详实,句式灵活多变,使得文章生动并吸引人。开篇用问句,引出下文;结尾点题,总结全文。并且很有文学性。
范文讲评:旅行
  「要求」
  暑假就要到了,许多同学都会选择旅游作为度假的一种方式。的确,旅游对一个人的身心健康颇有好处。那么就请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句,写一篇旅游的文章。
  Travel is a very good means of broadening a person’s perspective.
  Travel may relieve a person of boredom and gloom.
  Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages.
  「范文」
  Travel
  Travel is a very good means of broadening a person’s perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures,meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much,you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences,but also be aware of the vastness of nature.
  Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience,which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later,you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences,thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind.
  The field’s his study,nature was his book.
  Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are less expensive,but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle,which,although slow,can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature.
  「评语」
  本文首先陈述了旅游能够开阔人们眼界的原因,接着指出为什么旅游能够消除烦闷、抑郁的心情,最后说明进行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的优缺点。本篇各段解释言简意明,主题突出。“come into contact with…”,“enrich you knowledge and experiences”,“be aware of the vastness of nature”,“disperse your boredom”,“broaden your mind”等词语的恰当搭配,生动而准确地表现出了旅游的益处。
范文:大型企业和小型企业 Large Companies and Small Companies
  Directions:Write a composition on the topic Large Companies and Small Companies in thirty minutes. You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)below.
  
  1.大学毕业后有的人希望在大公司工作。
  
  2.有的人则认为在小公司工作更能锻炼人。
  
  3.我的看法。
  参考范文:
  Large Companies and Small Companies
  Upon graduation from college,young men and women face the first choice in their career life:to go to a large company or a small one? Although many graduates are attracted by the prestige of large companies,I believe the small one will afford more chances of success and more opportunities to develop your ability.
  There are two basic differences between the large and small enterprises.
  First,working in the small company you operate primarily through personal contacts;you have more chance to develop your communication ability and the ability to handle various kinds of personalities. In contrast,in the large company there are established policies and fairly rigid procedures. Even the man at the top is only a cog in a big machine: you needn’t make any decision and can’t see the effect of your work……
   Second,in a small business you are normally exposed to all kinds of experiences and expected to do a great many things without too much help or guidance. Thus,you may acquire much more skills and experience,and develop the ability to handle different,complicated things. But in the large corporation,since you are normally taught one thing and limited to one procedure,you may become the man who knows more and more about less and less.
  Obviously if you want to gain more experience and ability needed in business organizations and to become an excellent manager or executive in your future career,working in a small company is your best choice.
 

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