Mr Moor, our English teacher, is a lovely man. He is thirty-four years old and he is from the United States. We all love him thanks to his teaching attitude that every one can learn English well as long as he/she works harder. No matter when we ask him questions, he is always glad to answer them. Furthermore, he often asks us to study the questions and problems carefully before we start to solve them. It is demanded that every student raise and answer a question every day. As he said, asking "why" is able to assist us to know more. With time flying, we have been making more and more progresses, and of course, we admire him more and more.
今年命题者用诗歌的形式来表现提纲。 同学们第一次接触到这种命题形式, 乍一看确实有点手足无措, 仔细分析其实今年的命题在实质上并没有发生改变,依然是换汤不换药(old wine ,new bottle) ,完全 就是一个穿上时尚外衣的老朋友――提纲式作文。 此题等价于如下考生最擅长的提纲式作文: 题目:My Teacher Mr.Moore 内容必须包含以下三点:
  1.lovely and thirty-four
  2.encourage us, leads us to a world of “why”
  3.we admire him more and more 此时大家再来写这篇作文,就会觉得得心应手,因为大家平常训练最多的也就是这种类型。 根据提纲式作文写法分析如下: 第一段: 提出文章要描述的对象, 于是就可以写出第一段内容 Of all my teachers, Mr.Moore is the one who impressed me most.当然最好不要写成 This is my teacher Mr.Moore.这种开头一般是介绍 或者寻人启事,呵呵。 第二段:详细描述,根据提纲中的关键词 lovely, thirty four, encourage us, leads us to a world of “why”加以组织,连接成有逻辑关系且阐述清楚的话语,这也是这篇文章的考点所在。于是可以这样来 适当添加内容: Though he is 34, he appears very young for his age. And he is one of the most popular teachers among our students. Compared with other teachers, Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching. He tries various ways to make his classes vivid and interesting. He always tells us we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”, so, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With his help, we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problems. What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to! 这一段第一句就相当好, 首先用 Though 来过渡。 接着连词 and 继续描述 Mr.Moore 的特征 the most popular. Compared with 词组自然过渡到描述 Mr.Moore 如何 encourage us to try ,然后用 with his
help 来总结他的教学给我们带来的影响。本段末尾用一个感叹句来揭示 leads us to a world of “why”。 文中连词用得相当好,每一句话都有连词来过渡,这是同学们最缺乏的。另外文章句型的多变性也值得大 家学习,比如使用固定搭配 not only…but also, compared with, instead of, with his help 等,这些 使得文章必然是满分。同学们平时应该有意识地用连词连接自己说的每一句话。使自己的文章更加紧凑, 层次清晰;同时记得使用比较好的固定搭配,让你的文章增色。 第三段: 总结自己的观点。 这是各种文体的通用写法。 根据提纲中的 we admire him more and more. 为了承接第二段内容,我们写出一个承上启下的句子:He is so learned that we all admire him very much and we all love him for ever. 最后总结高考作文变化的应对策略,同学们应该沉着,敏锐地分析高考作文花架子下的实质,这样大家就 可以以不变应万变。无论高考作文形式怎么变,大家的高分永不变!
附范文: My Teacher Mr.Moore Of all my teachers,Mr.Moore is the one who impressed me most. Though he is 34,he appears very young for his age. And he is one of the most popular teachers among our students.Compared with other teachers,Mr.Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching.He tries various ways to make his classes vivid and interesting. And he always tells us we should not only know “what”,but also understand “why”,so,instead of giving us answers immediately,he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With his help,we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problems.What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to! He is so learned that we all admire him very much and we all love him for ever.
Recently I have made an investigation among 100 students of Senior.One in our school.About 45 precent students go to school without breakfast. While 35 percent students do not treat breakfast seriously.Only 20 percent students have enough breakfast with nutrition every morning. Some students who study late into the night choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. Others are given money to buy their breakfast on the way to school because their parents are too busy to prepare it for them. In addition, a few school girls want to stay silm and often go to school without breakfast. In fact breakfast is very important. It can make you have good member, and good judgement, and make you in good heip. So every student should start their day with a regular breakfast.
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Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet Ten years ago, the Internet was practically unheard of by most people. Today, the Internet is one of the most powerful tools throughout the world. The Internet is a collection of various services and resources. According to Russ Brock, a director and consultant at the Center for Innovation and Inquiry, the Internet’s main components are E-mail and the World Wide Web. “There’s a lot more to the Internet than E-mail, search engines, celerity web sites, up-to-the-second sports scores, and chat rooms full of risqué discussions. The Net also ranks as one of today’s best business tools - if it’s used adroitly”. Almost all households contain the Internet; however, before people connect to the Internet, they need to be aware of its disadvantages and advantages.
Many fear the Internet because of its disadvantages. They claim to not use the Internet because they are afraid of the possible consequences or are simply not interested. People who have yet connected to the Internet claim they are not missing anything. Today’s technological society must realize, it is up to them to protect themselves on the Internet “Half of U.S. adults, or 94 million Americans, aren’t online”. Children using the Internet has become a big concern. Most parents do not realize the dangers involved when their children log onto the Internet. When children are online, they can easily be lured into something dangerous. When children talk to others online, they do not realize they could actually be talking to a harmful person. As a result, there have been many cases where children have been convinced to meet people they have talked with online. In fact, “stories seem to come out every week: a child or teenager lured into something foolish, dangerous, or even deadly on line” . Cathy Cleaver of the Family Research Council claims that it is against the law for a molester to even attempt to find children online . In addition, children may also receive pornography online by mistake; therefore, causing concern among parents everywhere. Whether surfing the Web, reading newsgroups, or using email, children can be exposed to extremely inappropriate material. Pornographic sites tend to make sure they are the first sites to be listed in any search area; thus, children come across such sites easily. A man from Pearl, Mississippi was arrested in 1996 for downloading pornographic images of children from the Internet. He was charged with 290 counts of child pornography . Some critics say that parents are responsible for their own children on the Internet because there are available services to protect children. To keep children safe, parents and teachers must be aware of the dangers. They must actively guide and guard their children online. Parents should talk to their children about what is online and what might happen online, claims Howard Rheingold, writer of The Virtual Community . There are a number of tools available today that may help keep the Internet environment safer for children. Some companies, such as America Online, try to monitor everything that is said and done on their online service; however, because thousands of chat rooms are available, it is simply impossible for everything to be monitored, claims Tricia Primrose, worker for America Online . In other words, children want to explore things; however, there are people on the Internet that are just too persuasive.
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一、~ the + ~ est +名词+(that)+主词+ have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read,etc) ~ the most +形容词+名词+(that)+主词+ have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)
例句: Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教 师。 二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to + V 例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。 三、 ~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调……的重要性也不 为过。) 例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 四、There is no denying that + S + V……(不可否认的……) 例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 五、It is universally acknowledged that +句子~~(全世界都知道……) 例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。 六、There is no doubt that +句子~~(毫无疑问的……) 例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 七、An advantage of ~~~ is that +句子(……的优点是……) 例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't
create(produce)any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。 八、The reason why +句子~~~ is that +句子(……的原因是……) 例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 九、So +形容词+ be +主词+ that +句子(如此……以致于……) 例句:So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪 费它。 十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be,S + V~~~(虽然……) 例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不} 虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。 十一、The + ~er + S + V,~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~ The + more + Adj + S + V,~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈……愈……) 例句:The harder you work,the more progress you make. The more books we read,the more learned we become. 十 二 、 By 例句: By taking exercise,we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。 +Ving , ~~ can 你愈努力,你愈进步。
我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。
~~( 借 着 …… , …… 能 够 ……
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V(……使……能够……)
例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 十四、On no account can we + V ~~~(我们绝对不能……) 例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 十五、It is time + S +过去式(该是……的时候了)
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。 十六、Those who ~~~(……的人……) 例句: Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。 十七、There is no one but ~~~(没有人不……) 例句:There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V(不得不……) 例句:Since the examination is around the corner,I am compelled to give up doing sports. 既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。 十九、It is conceivable that +句子(可想而知的) It is obvious that +句子(明显的) It is apparent that +句子(显然的) 例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~(那就是……的原因) 例句:Summer is sult
 

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