INTERNATION SCHOOL THIRD ENGLISH SPEAKING CONTEST Light a bulb for yourself Ladies and gentlemen,it’s my great honor to stand here to give you a speech. At first ,please allow me to introduce myself. I am wenzhan.You also can call me wenny. I come from huanggang, hubei province. Now, I’m a sophomore from Electronic Engineering School. My topic is light a bulb for yourself. At the beginning of this semester, I was lucky to be a volunteer to welcome the new students. At the date of september,before the new students come to school,my leader told us that ”now you are prefect, so when you were asked how is our school,you should remenber that you are not only a menber of your school,the more impotant is that you need to bring confidence to your underclassmen. you have got through the first gread,so you have got must know how deep your underclassmen believe you. What have recalled my memery when i am a freshman here. My brain is full of imagination of my college life. So how to spend my collegy life puzzled me. Then i meet my prefect, something changed me. College is a place to improve your comprehensive ability. There are three goals in the start of my college life. The first one is to join the Youth League branch. The second one is to get
morning early every morning to do some reading or exercies. The last one is to make some friends in your new environment. I’m I’m seeking for a model in my real life. After becoming a member of youth league branch I found my best friend ,my minister. Who is a bulb in my life. The bulb is lighting. My dream is clearer. more. The difficulties are not big problems any more. There are Two forget things i will never forget in my life. Now I would like to share them you.. with you.. First,LEARNING. It is better to say college is a place to teach you how to study yourself. by yourself. The professor is not like your teacher in the high homework, school,they would not leave you with too much homework, they yourself. help you to learn and think by yourself. So to learn how to study by ralely yourself is important. And then, if you ralely go to the library in the year’ wasted three year’s college life, it means you have wasted plenty of wealth. As a result you should go to the library ,which is a good way to expand your knowledge and view. If you are not popular with your school,then chances classmates in high school,then college can give you chances to mould yourself again. Friends are one part of your future should cause,they can help you, but you should also have the ability to help them, so you are all have to try hard. Second, work ability.
college, realized Since the entry of the college, you have realized the employment presure, presure,You need to have a clear career goal and arm yourself with academic knowledge and skills, which will qualify you for the job you apply for. Never respond to help someone but not do anything,that can undermine their faith in you. Integrity is important. Don’t be late for the meeting,if you are late for one minite,it means you have waste 30 minites of others’ time, so time keeping is an important qualitty. Grasp the oppotunity to speak in public to practice your communication skills, which will be very useful when you come to the society. Thank you for your coming. 文展同学, 因为, 我个人上周比较忙, 所以, 到现在才把你的演讲稿, 作了些建议性的修改。请求原谅。 总体来说,演讲稿的是不错的,最后几段从内容,句型结构、口语表 达都比较适合演讲的风格。我看了几遍你的演讲稿,对于你的稿件, 作以下建议
  1、after , so,before 等词汇有些重复,建议,你尽量用其它的词替 代。
  2、内容方面,第二段的内容,你需要多看看。文章用词方面,语气 方面可以多考虑考虑。
  3、红的部分是我作了较大更改部分,不知道,我是否能完全的符全 你所要表过的意思。我只是从英语习惯表达方面考虑,所以,你可以
根据你自己的实际情况来采用或不采用。 其它方面,还比较不错,在演讲的最后,记得说一两句结总结的结束 语。 最后,祝你在这次演讲中能取得佳绩。
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