(作文点评 作文点评) 作文点评
Directions: You want to study at a certain foreign university. Write a letter to ask about the situation there as regards what qualifications one needs for acceptance, fees, possible scholarships, and accommodation.
词汇,拼写,标点, 避免直接用原句
lettle (letter) Inquiriment (inquiry) Semestor (semester) Be concered about (concerned) After their friends lefting (leave) Yancheng Teacher’s Colleague (college) A undergraduate
搭配
after you graduate the university If I enter in your school Once I told to her about this Do some improvement If I want to be succeed I’m looking forward for your reply
a sophomore students Acquiring the situation and some messages about your university Your university becomes a temptation to me for a long time
表达
I am writing the letter on the purpose of… I am looking forward your reply I want to know each semester’s fees If I enter your school with a perfect study
结构
As Califonia is a beautiful university many students want to go, so your reply will be appreciated Firstly, what conditions I need have, can make me study in the university
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information. First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study in your university? I have already had a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation? I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
Dear Sir or Madam, 1 I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. 2 My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information. First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study in your university? I have already had a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation? I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

  5. 段落结构 三段,八句。 首段两句,自我介绍+目的;中间段五句, 三点,短句为主,长短结合;尾段两句, 期待回信+重申目的。
  6. 关联词 first, second, third

  7. 同义替换

  1) 学费 fee, tuition
  2) 关于 as regards, regarding
  3) 著名的 prestigious, esteemed
  4) 大学 university, institution
  5) 申请入学 apply for admission, attend
  6) 条件 qualifications, requirement
常用书信的客套语
问候 I haven’t heard from you for ages. How are you doing? I haven’t seen you for such a long time. How are you getting along with your work? 祝贺 I want to congratulate you with all my heart. I warmly congratulate you on what you’ve achieved.
致谢 I am most grateful to you for your help. I want to thank you heartily for what you have done. 询问 I wonder if you could tell me what to do. I’d be most grateful if I could have your full support. Please could you let me know something about it?
邀请 Is there any chance of your coming to have dinner with us at our home? We are wondering if you could come to have dinner with us at our home. 接受邀请 I’m delighted to accept your invitation. Thanks for your invitation. I’m certainly looking forward to joining you.
拒绝邀请 I’m sincerely sorry that we can’t join your dinner party. I regret to say “no” to your invitation. Thank you for your invitation but unfortunately… 抱歉 I do apologize for having kept you waiting. I’m awfully sorry for giving you so much trouble.
同情 I’m more than sorry to hear of your illness. I can’t tell you how sad I felt when I heard of… 安慰 It was a great shock to hear… I just can’t tell you how saddened I am… I’m most grieved to learn of…
考研英语小作文书信类八大模板
  1:投诉信 : Dear, I am (自我介绍 .I feel bad to trouble you but I am 自我介绍) 自我介绍 afraid that I have to make a complaint about. The reason for my dissatisfaction is (总体介绍 In the first 总体介绍). 总体介绍 place,(抱怨的第一个方面 In addition, (抱怨的 抱怨的第一个方面). 抱怨的第一个方面 抱怨的 第二个方面). 第二个方面 Under these circumstances, I find it (感 感 抱怨的方面给你带来的后果). 觉)(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果 抱怨的方面给你带来的后果 I appreciate it very much if you could (提出建议和请 提出建议和请 进一步的要求),and I would like to have this 求), preferably (进一步的要求 进一步的要求 matter settled by (设定解决事情最后期限 设定解决事情最后期限). 设定解决事情最后期限 Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming

  2:询问信 : Dear , I am (自我介绍). I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding.(要询问的内容) First of all, what are ?(第一 个问题) Secondly, when will?(第 二个问题) Thirdly, is ?(第三个问题) I would also like to inquire (将最重要的问 题单独成段). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects? Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely Li Ming

  3:请求信 : Dear, I am writing to formally request to(请求的内容) The reason foris that(给出原 因).I, so I(给出细节) I would also like to request(提出进一步的 要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at (电话号码).I look forward to a favorable reply. Yours sincerely Li Ming

  4:道歉信 : Dear , I am truly sorry that(道歉的 原因). The reason is that_(介绍原因) Once that_( ) again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely Li Ming

  5:感谢信 : Dear, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for (感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in (对方给你的 具体帮助), I fear that I would have been(没有对方帮助时的后果). Every one agrees that it was you who(给出细节).Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely Li Ming

  6:建议信 : Dear , You have asked me for my advice with regard to , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: (建议的内容) I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good Luck with your(祝愿) Yours sincerely Li Ming

  7:求职信 : Dear Sir or Madam, I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in(报纸名称)of(广告发布 时间). Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a(工作名称). In the one hand,(第一个原因). On the other hand, (另一个原因). Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at (电话号码) Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you. Yours sincerely Li Ming

  8:邀请信 : Dear, There will be a (内容) at/in (地点) on (时间). We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at (具体时 间). This will be followed by a (进一步的 安排). At around(时间), (另一个安排) I really hope you can make it. RSVP before (通知你的最后期限) Yours sincerely Li Ming
第二讲) 应用文写作指导 (第二讲)
一 书信 二 便条 三 通知 四 启事 五 备忘录 六 报告 七 摘要
二 便条
便条是一种简单的书信。内容简单,主 要目的是为了尽快地把最新的信息、通知、 要求或者活动的时间、地点转告给对方。
特点: 特点:
  1. 语言简单扼要,直截了当,无需使用客 套语言。
  2. 中心务必突出,更要注明活动的时间及 地点。
  3. 便条不需邮寄,不用信封。通常请人代 为转交。有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。
Attention!

  1.词句简洁,尽量避免应酬语和各种敬 词
  2.切忌内容空洞、言不达意。
基本写作格式: 基本写作格式: 便条内容和类型不尽相同,可以灵活变通。 但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素;
  1) Date:便条日期
  2)Salutation:称呼
  3) Body:正文
  4)Signature:署名
分类
请假 (Asking for Leave) 约请 (Invitation) 道歉 (Apology) 借物 (Borrowing) 回复友人问侯 (Reply for Regards)
1 请假
(Asking for Leave)
Directions: Your father is seriously ill, and you want to go back home. Write a note to the secretary and it should include.
  1) the cause for leaving;
  2) the days: from 16th to 21 st;
  3) Catch on the lesson after returning school.
July 5th
Dear Miss Huang, My sister called me last night, and she said that my father is dangerously ill. I beg to apply for seven days’ leave from 16th to 21st instant, in order that I can see my beloved father. I should be much obliged if you would grant me my application. As regards the lessons to be missed during my absence, I will do my best to make up for them as soon as I get back from home. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
2 约请 (Invitation)
Directions: You have a ticket to the Russian National Ballet Troupe, which is visiting and you want t o give it to your friend Alice. Write a note to her about:
  1) the time of the show,
  2) the place where you will wait for her You should write about 100 words.
July 5th Dear Alice,
Here is a piece of good news for you. The R ussian National Ballet Troupe, which is now on a visit in Beijing, will give a performance in the Beijing Grand Theater tomorrow evenin g. I am sure that you will be happy to watch it. Here I leave you an admission card. The performance will begin at seven o’clock sharp. I will wait for you at the theater entrance. Please let me know w hether you are prevented from coming or not.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
3 道歉 (Apology)
在社会交往中,人们常常会出现一些疏忽、过失 等,给对方带来麻烦和不便。在这种情况下,应写 信给对方予以解释,以请求谅解。 此类信要写得及时,态度要诚恳,用词需谦 逊。一般在信一开始就向对方表示歉意或内疚, 然后说明原因并提出补救的办法。
道歉 (Apology)
Directions: You have missed a date of your friend, now you have to write a letter for apology in about 100 words.
May 20th Dear Lily, I am sorry I missed seeing you yesterday. I know that you must have been disappointed. I also feel worried and anxious in my heart. The fact is that my manager at the last moment asked me to prepare an urgent plan while I could not get to a phone to call you and yesterday I have worked late until about 8:30 p. m. I am terribly sorry. However, I would like to ask you out this weekend to make up for yesterday. Please give me a chance and I am waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
4 借物
(Borrowing)
Directions: You are going to write a note for borrowing something. please describe these information clearly.
  1) the thing you ask
  2) detailed what you are going to do with it.
  3) how long will you take it.
July 5th Dear Xiao Wang, I wonder if I could borrow your electronic dictionary for a few days. Now I am translating some importa nt articles. There are many new words which I hav e to look up in the dictionary usually. I just have a paper dictionary but of course it’s not as convenient as the electronic one, so I think your electronic dic tionary is more suitable for me to complete my wor k. I promise that I must be very careful of your dict ionary and make no damage done on it. Thank you very much! Yours sincerely, Li Ming
5 回复友人问侯
(Reply for Regards)
Directions: You have just had an operation, and receive d a note of regards from your friend Jenny. Now please write a reply to her to tell her your current situation. You should write about 100 words.
 

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