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Ke Qiao High School has history of 60 years. As time goes by, great changes have been taken place in our school.Our school, covers an area of more than 180 mu , consists of 66 classes. With green grass and trees planted everywhere , the air here is fresh. To our delighted, not only are the teachers strict in us students, but they pay many attention to training our creative ability. They break away from the old teaching ideas attempting to employ new teaching methods. We concentrate on their study but are eager to acquire new knowledge. So wonderfully is Ke Qiao High School that she is always ahead of other school in the area .
Ke Qiao High School has history of 60 years. As time ∧ goes by, great changes have been taken place in our school.Our school, covers an area of more than 180 mu , consists of 66 classes. With green grass and trees planted everywhere , the air here is fresh. To our delighted, not only are the teachers strict in us students, but they pay many attention to training our creative ability. They break away from the old teaching ideas attempting to employ new teaching methods. We concentrate on their study but are eager to acquire new knowledge. So wonderfully is Ke Qiao High School that she is always ahead of other school in the area .
Ke Qiao High School has a history of 60 years. As time goes by, great changes have taken place in our school. Our school, covering an area of more than 180 mu , consists of 66 classes. With green grass and trees planted everywhere , the air here is fresh. To our delight, not only are the teachers strict with us students, but they pay much attention to training our creative ability. They break away from the old teaching ideas attempting to employ new teaching methods. We concentrate on our study and are eager to acquire new knowledge. So wonderful is Ke Qiao High School that she is always ahead of other schools in the area .
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? 学校网站新开设了一个“英语写作”栏目(column), 学校网站新开设了一个“英语写作”栏目( ), 以便学生发表( 以便学生发表(post)英语作文,进行交流,提高写作 )英语作文,进行交流, 能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍,内容包括: 能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍,内容包括: ? 开设目的 ? 栏目优势:教师在线(online)指导等 栏目优势:教师在线( ) ? 作文要求:内容贴近学生生活 作文要求: ? 优秀作文的鼓励办法 ? 邀请大家参与 ? 注意:
  1. 词数 注意: 词数100左右 左右 ?
  2. 开头已为你写好(不计入总词数) 开头已为你写好(不计入总词数) ?
  3. 请在答题卡上作答 ? Welcome to the column“English Writing”!
? We set up this column hope to help students post their compositions and communicate with each other. After that, they can develop their writing level. We establish this column hoping to help students post their compositions and communicate with each other. In this way they can improve their writing.
一种方法是独立完成, 一种方法是独立完成,这样我们就可以自己 决定什么时候开始以及怎么样做。 决定什么时候开始以及怎么样做。 One way is to work individually. In this way, we can decide for ourselves when to start work and how to do it.
aim ; be aimed at
? This column is aimed at helping students post their compositions , communicating with others as well as improving their writing abilities. ? This column is aimed at improving students’ writing abilities and provides a stage where students are supposed to post compositions and communicate with each other.( Zhen Wei)
这个网站旨在让我们交流学习经验,欣赏音乐, 这个网站旨在让我们交流学习经验,欣赏音乐,结交朋友
The website is aimed at …
In terms of its advantages, excellent teachers ? The strength of the program is that teachers are available online, giving us guidance and can guide and instruct us online. offering useful advice on writing . ? Comparing traditional column, our column has Compared to many advantages. For example, students can get advice from teachers online.
这个故事是不完整。例如,它没有涉及到起因 这个故事是不完整。例如,它没有涉及到起因. The story is incomplete. For example, it fails to cover the cause.
? If you desire to post your articles, you’d better life write something close to students’ lives. It We have a require that articles are linked to ? is required that students’ life so that this column will be popular with students.
As for the requirement, articles linked to students’ life are badly needed so that this column will be popular with students.
要求学生不准带手机进入学校。 要求学生不准带手机进入学校。 It is required that students are forbidden to enter the school with mobile phones.
post ? We will put up excellent compositions on the composition website and the writers will be praised on our writer column.
? Excellent articles will be prized in order to inspire more students to take part in. In order to inspire more students to take part, we guarantee that the students whose compositions are excellent will be awarded
? We sincerely invite everyone to join in the column so that you can acquire an excellent a stage. for further development.
? Don’t hesitate and take up your pen, write to . us soon. We will appreciate it if you would write to me as soon as possible.
?目的 目的
? 1 ….., hoping to…. ? 2 be aimed at ? 3 provide a stage where…….
? 优势
? In terms of its advantages,… ? Compared to..., … has many advantages. For example, …
? 要求
? If you desire to do sth, you ‘d better …… ? It is required that …… ? As for the requirement, sth linked to … is badly needed.
? 奖励
? In order to inspire …, we guarantee that sb whose …. will be awarded
? 鼓动
? Don’t hesitate and …. I will appreciate it if you would …
? 假定你校将举行一个成人仪式,你将作为代表在仪式上 假定你校将举行一个成人仪式, 发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。 发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。 ?
  1.过去对成年的向往; 过去对成年的向往; 过去对成年的向往 ?
  2.现在的感受和认识; 现在的感受和认识; 现在的感受和认识 ?
  3.将来的目标及措施。 将来的目标及措施。 将来的目标及措施 ? 参考词汇:责任 responsibility 参考词汇: ? 注意:
  1.词数 注意: 词数 词数100左右; 左右; 左右 ?
  2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
  2.可以适当增加细节 使行文连贯; 可以适当增加细节, ?
  3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数) 发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好( 发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好 不计入总词数) ? Good morning,everyone! , ! ? The topic of my speech today is “thoughts on becoming a grown-up”. ? ? Thank you for listening.
? ? ? ? ? ? ?
怎样改善学生的心理健康? 怎样改善学生的心理健康
  1. 学生心理健康的重要性
  2. 学校应该怎样做
  3. 学生自己应该怎样做 注意: .内容要点全面,并表达出你的观点。 注意:
  1.内容要点全面,并表达出你的观点。
  2.为了使文章连贯,可适当增加内容。 .为了使文章连贯,可适当增加内容。
  3.词数:120词左右。文章的开头已经给出,但不计 词左右。 .词数: 词左右 文章的开头已经给出, 入总词数。 入总词数。 ? 参考词汇:a psychological counseling 心理咨询 参考词汇: ? How to improve psychological health? ? As is known to all, psychological health is as important as, if not more important than, physical health for a student during his / her growth.
?
However, it's quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy. ? Undoubtedly, schools and universities are supposed to attach great importance to students' psychological health. Relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it. For example, there should be a psychological counseling hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid. ? Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves. From my perspective, what they can do is to stay optimistic and always try to look for an opportunity even in difficulty and maintain a positive mental attitude.
? We have discussed the problem whether the home visit is necessary nowadays. Opinions are divided. ? Some people consider that home visits will make it easy for parents and teachers to communicate more closely, which contributes to improve students’ grades. ? This traditional way will present teachers with a chance to have a better understanding of students. Meanwhile, students will feel that teachers are concerned with them.
? Unfortunately, others hold the opposite opinion because they think it is a waste of time and energy. If they keep in touch with students’ parents with text messages, QQ, or e-mails, it will more convenient and save plenty of time. ? As for me, home visits are positive, through which teachers can educate their students effectively.
假如你是李华,你的外教David回国后听说北大清华各自 组成联盟自主招生,很感兴趣,写信给你想了解人们对此 的反应,刚好最近人民网进行了“北约”、“华约”自主 招生,您咋看?请据此给David回信。
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

  59.8% 反对,其他高校招生会被影响 ; 反对, 26% 支持 为了考生减少成本增加机会 支持,为了考生减少成本增加机会 为了考生减少成本增加机会;
  11.5% 建议,组团联考还应积极探索 ; 建议,
  2.7% 其他,有话要说 其他, 要求: 要求:
  1.简要介绍调查情况; .简要介绍调查情况;
  2.你的观点及理由;
  2.你的观点及理由; Dear David, Glad to receive your letter. Yes, recently Peking University Group and Tsinghua University Group announced their independent recruitment. Soon after that, www. people. com.cn a survey entitled “What do you think of the independent recruitment of Pcking University Group and Tsinghua University Group”
As is shown in the bar chart, …percent of the students claim that ……. ……comes second, with …percent holding the opinion. ………………, which …percent of the students share. Students also ……. . The number makes up/ accounts for….
Which of the following influences the music that you listen to?
60% 50% 学生比例 40% 30% 20% 10% 0% Friends Radio TV/Film 影响因素 Parents
50% 30% 20% 10%
? As is shown in the bar chart, 50 percent of the students claim that TV and films have the greatest influence on the music they listen to ? The influence of the friends comes second, with 30 percent holding the opinion. ? radio is another perfect source of good music, music which 20 percent of the students share. ? Students also listen to music recommended by parents . The number makes up/ accounts for 10 percent.

  59.8% 反对,其他高校招生会被影响 ; 反对, 26% 支持 为了考生减少成本增加机会 支持,为了考生减少成本增加机会 为了考生减少成本增加机会;
  11.5% 建议,组团联考还应积极探索 ; 建议,
  2.7% 其他,有话要说 其他, As is shown in the bar chart, 50 percent of the students are opposed to the policy and claim that other universities will be affected. ? This practice will save students’ trouble and give them more opportunity, with 26 percent holding the opinion. ? The recruitment should be explored and tested , which 20 percent of the students share. ? Students also have different opinions . The number makes up/ accounts for
  2.7 percent. ? ? ? ? ?
? Personally , I strongly support the practice. Focusing on students’ abilities, the test is rather different from the traditional ones. Moreover, I particularly appreciate the interview, through which interviewers can get a better understanding of the students’ personalities, capacities, and creativities. If some talented students can be admitted into universities, the high pressure of the entrance exam will be largely reduced.
? 假如你是李华,你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园” 假如你是李华,你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园” 的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会, 的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会,请你用英语写一篇 发言稿,谈一谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想法。 发言稿,谈一谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想法。 短文应该包括下面的内容: 短文应该包括下面的内容: ?
  1.安全意识的重要性; .安全意识的重要性; ?
  2.在运动中要注意安全; .在运动中要注意安全; ?
  3.在校
 

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