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分析建议类) (分析建议类) A Letter to the College President

  1. 就学校的某些变化给校长写封信
  2. 分析变化主要表现在哪些方面
  3. 提出(进一步)改进的意见 提出(进一步)
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  1) I am delighted (distressed) to find there have been favorable(unfavorable) changes in … 议论的主题) (议论的主题) since I came here.
  2) From my angle of view, these changes indicate that what you have done is in (out of) line with ...(作者的态 ...( 度)
  3) In the long run, they will produce more positive (negative) effect on ...
  4) Such desirable (undesirable) changes can be found in the aspects as follows.
  5) First, …
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分析II) ) (分析I) )Second, ... (分析II)
  7) And 分析I)
  6) I) best(worst) of all, …(分析III)
  8) ... (进一步阐 (分析III) 述)
  9) But all the foregoing does not mean that there is little room for further improvement in …(that there is little you can do about …)
  10) Instead, to enrich (reverse)…, a richer variety (a better health) can be added to …(建议I)
  11) (建议I) And meanwhile, ... (建议II)
  12) It should be 建议II) born in mind that … (结论句) 结论句)
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A Letter to the College President

  1. 就校园生活的可喜变化给校长写封信。 就校园生活的可喜变化给校长写封信。
  2. 分析该变化表现在哪些方面。 分析该变化表现在哪些方面。
  3. 提出进一步改进的建议。 提出进一步改进的建议。
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A Letter to the College President

  1) I am delighted to find there have been favorable changes in our campus life since I came here.
  2) From my angle of view, these changes indicate what you have done is in line with the interests of undergraduates.
  3) In the long run, they will produce more positive effect on our growth.
  4) Such desirable changes can be found in the aspects as follows.
  5) First, our dining
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conditions have turned for the better, thus ending our everyday worry about where to satisfy our hunger.
  6) Second, your faculties have paid as much attention to our emotional world as to our intellectual growth, which in turn lends much warmth of family to our life.
  7) And best of all, we find the campus a more pleasant place to live on.
  8) As a result of your efforts, we now have more places to go to for recreation, such as cafes, net bars, fitness centers and reading rooms.
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  9) But all the foregoing does not mean that there is little room for further improvement in our college life.
  10) Instead, to enrich our life here to the fullest, a richer variety should be added to our spare time as well as our curriculums.
  11) And meanwhile, we should be allowed more access to scientific research, social practice and the frontier of our own fields.
  12) It should be born in mind that the purpose of our college life is to prepare us for the different needs of tomorrow’s society.
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