运动与健康 The poster emphasizes a hardly unnecessary habit that everyone should cultivate-taking exercises regularly- by depicting a healthy girl who is energetically running. Behind her is exceptional number of students, playing basketball and doing other sports. Two characters below the picture, ‘sports’ and ‘health’, target at reminding us the intrinsic relationship between them. With marked improvement of citizens’ living conditions, individuals tend to lose the opportunity of taking exercise, such as taking elevator and driving instead of walking. However, lacking exercise contributes to the high incidence of diabetes and cancer. Accordingly, in order to possess a healthy body, taking exercises regularly turns out to be just as essential as keeping nutritious diet and taking adequate sleep. It is widely shared that taking exercise can also strengthen physique and help to keep a perfect figure. What is more, playing sports will not only refresh individuals’ mind from brainwork all day long but greatly improve individuals’ metabolism.(最后一句表达意思和前面有点重复,似 乎和倒数第二句交换位置好一些) All in all, I firmly believe sports are not the business of a small group of athletes, but a life-long pursuit that everyone should bear in mind and endeavor to put it into practice. Although difficult at the beginning, we should be aware that exercise is a long-term investment that might benefit us even more than our anticipation. (呃……这个有一半是范文句子凑的) 娱乐圈的道德缺失 When asking how to be an outstanding actor, one from the 30s put emphasize on learning to be a man of integrity first, while an actress intends to go deep into life to improve qualify(没明白什么意思). However, exceedingly different from all the others, a contemporary actress proudly proclaim: beauty and publicity is my key to be popular. (这句话是自己提炼的还是题目里给出的?好像不能反映道德缺失, 应再讲清楚 些) Of all the changes that have been taken place in the domain of entertainment, perhaps the most far-reaching one is the inexorable decline of occupational ethics-earning fame through scandals, especially sexy ones instead of strenuous work. Undoubtedly, such a trend is detrimental to long-term development of the industry and the young generation. Accordingly, it has been increasingly critical to publish more positive and inspiring cultural products so as to restore the echoes of the 30s and the 60s into entertainment circles.(为什么
要提 30s 和 60s) An positive entertainment product will not only refresh individuals’ mind from work all day long, but will trigger a deep-going consideration about life and relationship between each other. From my own perspective, constant efforts should be made by Chinese government to considerably improve the scope and regulation of the entertainment products. What is more, this is everyone’s business to resist unhealthy products and the actors in scandals. 这个基本全是我自己写的,恩…… 自己写的这篇挺好,比上一篇范文要好。我只改了几个小地方。高亮的部分没有 看明白什么意思
 

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