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  1.审题
  2.构思 段首句;举例。
  3.动笔
  4.检查
  1.三段论;
  2.文章开头尽量避免错误;
  3.写好第二段基本层次结构;
  4.多运用关联词语;
  5.不能说空话,要举例子。 例文评分。
  1.六级作文不要乱喊口号 We must be honest and faithful to our classmates, party, country and the whole world .
  2.文章内容要展开,注意举例子和分析原因。 (
  1)举例子 (
  2)分析原因 (
  3)万不得已凑字数
  1.The methodology suggested may not guarantee the ultimate success, but the eventual pay-off could be worth the effort.
  2. Achieving even partial success will benefit mankind and contribute to creating a better world.
  1.大量看范文。
  2.关注段首句的写法和举例子的写法。
  3.适当的练习。

  1.大量看范文。
  2.关注段首句的写法和举例子的写法。

  3.适当的练习。

  1.开头直接切入正题。
  2.议论文第二段的主题句要写好。
  3.第二段要分层次展开。
  4.用名言、举例、解释等手段充实第二段内容。
  5.结尾要干脆有力。 第一段:起始段。 第二段:展开段。 第三段:结论段。 第一段:引出现象或引出话题。 引出现象??阐述题; 引出话题??观点对立题。 现象 phenomenon; 话题 issue。 模版句
  1: People in growing numbers have become increasinglyaware of the seriousness of the phenomenon. 模版句
  2: There is a growing concern over the seriousness of the phenomenon. 举例(
  03.
  12): the waste on campus There is a growing concern over the seriousness of the waste on campus. People in growing numbers have become increasingly aware of the seriousness of the waste on campus 模版句: Whether something should or should not be done is a much debated problem in that it affects many people (in their everyday life). 举例(20
  00.
  6): Whether the test of speaking Englishshould or should not be taken is a much debated problem in that it affects many university students. 举例(
  97.
  6): Whether job-hopping should or should not be done is a much debated problem in that it affects many people. 正方观点: 正方观点: Some people argue that 反方观点: 反方观点: Others, on the contrary, claim that 正方观点(
  97.
  6) : Some people argue that doing one job does good to one’s career development. 反方观点:
Others, on the contrary, claim that job-hopping helps one acquire wide scope of knowledge and accumulate more work experience. 我的观点: Careful consideration leads me to believe that I tend to think that… It seems to me that… I am of the opinion that… I would take view that… 第二段主题句: The explanation for this phenomenon may include several factors and I will express only a few of the most important ones. The reason why I cannot accept the job offered may include several factors and I will express only a few of the most important ones. 三个层次: first of all; in addition; furthermore. first and foremost, besides, last but not least In the first place In the second place In the third place 个人层面
  1.个人的兴趣爱好 Doing something is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyday life. (
  02.
  6)A great many university students are fond of surfing online. Surfing online is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyday life. As a result, a great many university students indulge themselves in the internet.
  2.丰富/提高生活质量 Something helps to improve the quality of people’s lives. 例:The use of private cars helps to improve the quality of people’s lives.
  3.运动健身 Regular exercises benefit both the body and mind.
  4.社会责任感 Doing something will develop one’s strong sense of duty.
  5.参加活动,培养团队合作精神 Participating in activities can develop a sense of team spirit and cooperation.
  6.人际关系 Doing something will enhance mutual understanding. 例:Talking with my roommates will enhance mutual understanding.

  7.个人能力和职业发展 Doing something will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career. 例:Working hardwill develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career. Getting proper trainingwill develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career. 例:Working hardwill develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career. Getting proper trainingwill develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career. 社会层面
  1.促进经济发展 It helps to improve the economic strength.。 例:The recent policy helps to improve the economic strength.
  2.自然和社会资源 Itwill lead to great extravagance of natural resources and social resources. 例:Clear cutting will lead to great extravagance of natural resources.
  3.科技发展 It is a symbol of human progress and it extends the scope of human thinking. 例:The development of science and technology is a symbol of human progress and it extends the scope of human thinking。
  4、交通 Too many cars running on the streets lead to air pollution and noise pollution.
  5.教育 好处之一:Get oneself acquainted with the latest development in science and technology. 好处之二:Broaden one’s scope of knowledge.
  6.旅游 The tourist industry has played an important role in meeting the cultural needs of the public and carryingforward national culture.
  7.综合状况 The progress of our society is based on harmony. 基本思路: 主题句+解释+举例(进一步拓展延伸) Topic: Some people suggest that the government should invest a small amount of money, others think the museum is a financial burden? What do you think of it? 主题句: 一个东西给我们带来的好处,对我们产生的影响,或人们普遍的对这一事物的看 法。
主题句举例: 博物馆可以记录国家的历史
  1. Museums play an essential role in recording a country’s history.
  1. Admittedly, museums, of course, play an essential role in recording a country’s history. 对主题句解释: 博物馆有很多代表一个国家过去的艺术品。
  2. Museums usually have great collections of artistic objects which are the symbols of a country’s glorious past.
  2.As is known to the world, museums usually have great collections of artistic objects which are the symbols of a country’s glorious past. 举例: 故宫博物馆里有很多文物。
  3. For example, the Forbidden City Museum has a collection of antiques.
  3. For example, the Forbidden City Museum has a huge collection of delicate antiques of artistic and historical value. 进一步拓展:Museum 对人们的影响 影响之一:通过参观博物馆,人们可以学到关于历史和文化的东西。
  4. By visiting museums, we can learn a lot about our history and culture.
  4. It is widely acknowledged that we can learn a lot about our history and culture by visiting museums in our leisure time. It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife. It is universally acknowledged that… It is well accepted that… It is widely believed that It is generally maintained that… 继续引申: 有很多好处,例如可以完善人格.
  5. A clear understanding of our history and culture does good to the development of well-rounded character.
  5.It is a clear understanding of our history and culture that does good to the development of well-rounded character. 20
  06.12首次英语新6级作文题??The Importance of Reading Classics( 阅读经典 的重要性) 提纲:
  1.阅读经典对人的成长至关重要;
  2.人们越来越少地阅读经典,原因是……
  3.作为大学生,你应该怎么做。 主题句:

  1. There are a lot of reasons for it. 理由之一:学生缺乏兴趣?内容过时
  2. In the first place, many college students take no interest in reading classics, for they find classics outdated. 理由一的延伸:
  3. In other words, classics do not meet with their requirement of reading. 理由二:学生太忙,没时间阅读经典著作
  4. In the second place, nowadays ,many university students are occupied from morning till night.
  5. As a result, it is quite difficult for them to squeeze some time to read classics. 理由二的延伸:
  6. Since many students dedicate themselves to studying the course work, they pay no attention to reading classics. 理由三:经典著作比较深奥,让人疲惫厌倦
  7. In the third place, the contents of classics are usually filled with abstruse concepts and ideas. 理由三的延伸:
  8. Therefore, college students invariably feel tired and bored in the process of reading. 总结段落结构:8句话构成整个第二段 ①主题句 ②理由一 ③理由一的延伸 ④理由二 ⑤理由二的延伸 ⑥理由二的进一步解释 ⑦理由三 ⑧理由三的延伸 ①improve people’s living standards ②increase the government revenue ③improve the image of our country ④increase reputation and upgrade the status in the international community ⑤enhance mutual understanding ⑥play an educational role ⑦maintain world peace 源地址:http://blog.renren.com/GetEntry.do?id=455290673&owner=236018107
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