大学英语写作套路

  1.我的观点( VIEW)
  1.我的观点(MY VIEW) 我的观点
When asked about a theme, different people will offer different opinions... is no exception. Some people take it for granted that ... However, others hold that...
As for as I am concerned, that I am in favor for the second view. The reasons are as follows.
First, there is and elements of truth that ... But it doesn' doesn' t follow that... A case in point is that ...Therefore, the first doesn' view doesn't hold water.
In conclusion...

  2.优点和缺点( disadvantages)
  2.优点和缺点(Advantages and disadvantages) 优点和缺点
Nowadays, ...plays an important part in ... Like everything else, ...has both favorable and unfavorable aspects. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows
Firstly, ... Besides ... Most important of all ...
alse But every coin has tow sides. The negative aspects are alse apparent. To begin with, ... To make matters worse of all ...
Through above analysis, I believe that the advantages aspects outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore...

  3.怎么办(How
  3.怎么办(How to) 怎么办
Many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem, but the following ones may be most effective. First of all ... Another way to solve the problem of ... is ... Finally...
There are not the best and only tow measures we can take. But it should be noted that if we take strong action to ...

  4.选择行动(A
  4.选择行动(A or B) 选择行动
When you ... you will be faced with the choice between A and B. Before making the right choice, you had better make a close comparison and contrast of them.
B... First of all, A... Also, B... Second, A... likewise, B... Despite their similarities, A and B are also different in the following aspects. First, A... However, B... Besides, A... on the contrary, B...
Therefore, it depends with ... you should choose. If you ..., you should choose A; but if you ... you should turn to B.

  5.为什么(Why)..
  5.为什么(Why).. 为什么
There are many reasons for... but in general, they come down to three major ones. For one thing... for another thing ... Perhaps the prime reason is that ... From the foregoing...
谚语引用: 谚语引用:
As proverb goes that......
高分作文标志
1:是否长短句交叉; 是否长短句交叉; 交叉
2,是否会使用插入语; 是否会使用插入语;
3,用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球 用词是否多样,准确,形象, 的闪光词; 的闪光词;
4,关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
5,句型使用是否准确,地道. 句型使用是否准确,地道.
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项: 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:

  1.适当用被动替换主动,
  1.适当用被动替换主动, 适当用被动替换主动 这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要 这样能更客观的反映事实, (比如写结尾时不用 总是用 we / I (比如写结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而 用 Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾 2004 年六月六
级作文的最后一段: 级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry so, like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

  2.善于使用插入语, 连接词等, 作插入语放在中间,
  2.善于使用插入语, 善于使用插入语 比如说把副词, 比如说把副词, 连接词等, 作插入语放在中间, 一般放在主语,动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号. 一般放在主语,动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号.
如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在 中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号. 中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号.
比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude 比如说: that …
一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的.
  3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的.(考试中一般 不要出现 good, bad , many, thing, think,
等等)比如上面例子中, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中, applicable 替换 proper, one' approaches 替换 ways, implement 替换 carry out, sharpen one' one' competitiveness(提高 s competitive edge 替换 enhance one's competitiveness(提高 某物竞争力) 某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14 的例子, 下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14 分)的例子, 看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的. 看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的. 这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写 作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高. 作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高.
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother thrilling bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. sleepless,
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing the popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
是一个精彩句型, The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用 来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; 来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
非常地道的句型,表达" 一致"的意思, Coincident with … 非常地道的句型,表达"与…一致"的意思, 替换 With …
Advancement 替换 development
)替换 Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
Current ( currently )替换 now )替换
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
经典句型, It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型, 说某事是毫不夸张 的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the AVgrowing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处, 这个句子有三个精彩之处, 这个句型, 首先 There is no denying that 这个句型,还有 however 作为插入 语, function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )
网民, Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We
should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ,do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语
(而且 用的非常形象, Fruits (而且 fruits 用的非常形象, merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage )
Facet 替换 aspect
各位同学, 上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点, 各位同学, 上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点, 有这么多精彩的闪光点 作文怎么会不得 高分呢! 高分呢!
个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下. 以下是 30 个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下.
替换(people
  1.individuals,characters, folks 替换(people ,persons)
(美好的 美好的) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising
(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, 有希望的) superior 替换 good
unfavorable, (有害的 有害的) 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换 bad
做表语, 如果 bad 做表语,可以有 be less impressive 替换
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

  4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换 many. most)替换
一定要小心, 后一定要有词. 注:用 many, if not most 一定要小心,many 后一定要有词.
that hat… Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that…. 同理 用 most, if not all ,替换 most. ,替换
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several 替换 some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
that)替 it is universally acknowledged that)替 think
(因为是书面语,所以要加 that) 因为是书面语,
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换 thing
8: shared 代 common

  9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换 more and more( 注意没有 这种形式. increasing/growing. g.修 growingly 这种形式.所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing.修 饰形容词,副词用 increasingly. 饰形容词,
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

  12.little if anything, 或 little or nothing 替换 hardly

  13..beneficial, rewarding 替换 helpful,

  14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换 customer
  14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,

  15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换 very

  16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable

  17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb take interest in / sb. be interested in

  18.capture
  18.capture one's attention 替换 attract one's attention.

  19.facet,demension,sphere 代 aspect

  20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of 代 indicate, suggest ,fear

  21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换 cause.
替换..reasons
  22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth

  23.desire 替换 want.

  24.pour attention into 替换 pay attention to

  25.bear in mind that 替换 remember
have(注意 是过程的意思)
  26. enjoy, possess 替换 have(注意 process 是过程的意思)

  27. interaction 替换 communication

  28.frown on sth 替换 be against , disagree with sth

  29.to name only a few, as an example 替换 for example, for instance
impossible,替换
  30. next to / virtually impossible,替换 nearly / almost impossible
我们还可以借助某些词语用简单句表达原因结构.例如: 我们还可以借助某些词语用简单句表达原因结构.例如:
  1. The reason for this change is quite obvious.
key
  2. Diligence is the key factor of success.
  3. Idleness is the root of all evils. mistake.(
  4. He was ashamed to have made the mistake.(=He was ashamed that he had made the mistake. =He was ashamed because he had mistake.) made the mistake.) 除了上述的例句外,英语中还有很多或易或难的表达原因的结 除了上述的例句外,英语中还有很多或易或难的表达原因的结 我们在进行写作训练的时候,不能满足于一知半解,要讲究书面语 构. 我们在进行写作训练的时候,不能满足于一知半解,要讲究书面语 言的正确性和准确性.比如,because 是最常用的引导原因从句的连 的正确性和准确性.比如,because 置于句首, 词,语气最强,表示直接的原因,若 because 置于句首,后面的主句不 语气最强,表示直接的原因, so.用 引导的原因从句语气较弱,所说明的原因是附带的, 能再用 so.用 as 引导的原因从句语气较弱,所说明的原因是附带的, 表示的原因暗示着是稍加分析之后才能推断出来的原因. 而 since 表示的原因暗示着是稍加分析之后才能推断出来的原因. 四, 否定结构 考生病句
  1. Some people think we needn't to worry about fresh water.
  2. Nowadays many people don't like to go to the movies, too. 正确表达: 正确表达:

  1. Some people think we needn't worry (或 don't need to worry) about fresh water. worry)
  2. Nowadays many people don't like to go to the movies, either. 评议与分析: 评议与分析: 月四级考生作文 作文, 例句 1 选自 96 年 1 月四级考生作文,例句 2 选自 92
 

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