07年江苏卷书面表达范文
Good afternoon, everyone, On the morning of April 29,2007,from 10:00 to 11:00, hundreds of millions of students from primary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a in national student sports program. Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program. The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy their whole life. Personally, Personally I think it's a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for ecercise, it is well worth it. Taking well worth exercise helps build up our body and keep a clear mind. Therefore Therefore, we can work more efficiently. Thank you!

  08年江苏卷书面表达范文
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship. Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers gap should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be openminded to different opinions even though you don’t like In a word them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
How to polish up
your writing
书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(21-25分 了试题规定的任务: 第五档(21-25分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务: 准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容, 准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容,要点无遗漏 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 语法结构和词汇有少许错误, 语法结构和词汇有少许错误,但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式 所致; 所致;具备较强的语言应用能力 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分, 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档(16-20分 了试题规定的任务: 第四档(16-20分) 完成了试题规定的任务: 比较准确、 比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容 应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 语法结构和词汇应用基本准确, 语法结构和词汇应用基本准确,少许错误主要是因为尝试较复 杂语言结构或词汇所致 应用简单的语句间的连接成分, 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的 写作目的。 写作目的。
第三档(11-15分 第三档(11-15分) 了试题规定的任务。 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 能说出短文的基本内容,但逻辑关系较混乱,要点有遗漏, 能说出短文的基本内容,但逻辑关系较混乱,要点有遗漏, 没有写自己的认识 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 有一些语法结构和词汇的错误,但不影响理解 有一些语法结构和词汇的错误, 应用简单的语句间连接成分, 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
The polished points :
A. 较高级词汇 B.丰富的语法结构 丰富的语法结构 C.恰当使用过渡词或过渡句 使文章结构紧凑 恰当使用过渡词或过渡句,使文章结构紧凑 恰当使用过渡词或过渡句 使文章结构紧凑; D.段落的优化 段落的优化
较高级的词汇、 较高级的词汇、短语

  1. I used to like reading and writing poems at middle school.
I used to take delight in/ be fond of reading and writing poems at middle school.

  2. Suddenly I thought of a good idea.
All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me. A good idea suddenly struck me.

  3.You can find my house easily.
You have no trouble/difficulty in finding my house . You can find my house without any difficulty .
较高级的词汇、 较高级的词汇、短语
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  4.Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
Thanks to the good weather , our journey was comfortable.
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  5.In our school, there are twenty?six classrooms.
Our school is made up of twenty?six classrooms. Our school consists of twenty?six classrooms.
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  6.The old photo made me think of my happy childhood.
The old photo reminded me of my happy childhood.
较高级的词汇、 较高级的词汇、短语

  1. I used to take delight in/ be fond of reading and writing poems at middle school.
  2. All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me. A good idea suddenly struck me.
  3. You have no trouble/difficulty in finding my house . You can find my house without any difficulty .
  4. Thanks to the good weather , our journey was comfortable.
  5. Our school is made up of twenty-six classrooms. Our school consists of twenty-six classrooms.
  6. The old photo reminded me of my happy childhood.
丰富的语法结构
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  1. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. On hearing the bad news of his death, she went pale with sorrow. ?
  2. I was walking along Park Road towards the east. At that time, an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.
丰富的语法结构
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  3. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. ?
  4. He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things. To his surprise , the little girl knows so many things. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
丰富的语法结构
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  5. We can achieve our goal only in this way. Only in this way can we achieve our goal . ?
  6.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.
较高级的语法结构

  1.On hearing the bad news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.
  2. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.
  3. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.
  4. To his surprise , the little girl knows so many things. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
  5. Only in this way can we achieve our goal .
  6. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.
使用恰当的连接词
逻辑角度
⑴排序关系 ⑵并列关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺递进关系
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least and; too; as well as; along with; together with for example; for instance; like; such as; as to but; however; while; though; on the contrary because; since; thanks to; as a result /consequence (of); thus; therefore in a word; in short; to sum up; in conclusion what’s more; besides; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; furthermore
段落优化 1
This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is very small, , which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are leading a richer and happier life than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
段落优化 2
I think, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents though we are busy. Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged. As far as I am concerned, for us children, we should often go home and stay together with our parents however busy we are. What’s more, our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live a happy life. Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society
summary
要 点 全 连 接 巧
一篇好文章的标准: 一篇好文章的标准:
覆盖所有的要点 覆盖所有的要点 应用了较高级的词汇和丰富的语法结构 应用了较高级的词汇和丰富的语法结构 结构多样化 句型复杂化 有效地使用了连接成分 有效地使用了连接成分, 有效地使用了连接成分,使全文结构紧 行文连贯,条理清楚。 凑,行文连贯,条理清楚。
 

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