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Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy". ( 以“最能使 我快乐的方法”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的 短文,标点符号不占格) The following points are for your reference: (所给提示仅供参考)
  1. What are the ways to make you happy?
  2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy?
  3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)
语言( 分 文采( 分 语言 文采 内容( 分 内容(7分)+语言(8分)+文采(3分) 一、认真审题,结构合理 认真审题,
题目, *写什么 (题目,参考问题) 写什么 题目 参考问题)
Free talk
What should we write about? What shouldn’t we (only) write about?

  1. My school life
  2. My dream teacher
  3. The thing I hate to do
  4. My opinions of keeping pet dogs
  5.The best way to make me happy
语言( 分 文采( 分 语言 文采 内容( 分 内容(7分)+语言(8分)+文采(3分) 一、认真审题,结构合理 认真审题,
题目, *写什么 (题目,参考问题) 写什么 题目 参考问题)
Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy". The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考)
  1. What are the ways to make you happy?
  2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy?
  3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)
The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考)
  1. What are the ways to make you happy?
  2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy?
  3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)
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The best way to make me happy is achieving good marks. I think this way is the best one to make me happy because it is the easiest ways and it can improve my ability so I think it is the best way. In this way, I can get some prizes, so I will feel happy, what’s more it can also make my parents happy.
The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考)
  1. What are the ways to make you happy?
  2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy?
  3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons) 内容不全
there are a lot of ways to make me happy. The best way to make me happy is to play basketball. To play computer games is also a way to make me happy. Everyday we have PE lesson. These are a lot of interests in it. So I feel happy in this way.
The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考)
  1. What are the ways to make you happy?
  2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy?
  3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons) the best way to make me happy is to help another. When I feel sad, I can help another, because I hope the others happy. I can help old people cross the road and play with small children. In this way I feel another happy, then I also will happy. Help others not only make me happy, but also make others happy.
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What do you think of this article?
内容不全
The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.
  1. What was the thing you did in the winter holidays ? (1’)
  2. Give some descriptions about it, such as where/when/how /who, etc. (4’)
  3. Why do you think it’s the most unforgettable thing you did? (2’) The winter holidays are one of the most exciting holidays in the year. The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays is making a birthday cake with my mother on my birthday. My mother bought the things we needed from the supermarket. We mixed the flour and eggs, then added some special things to make the cake soft. Finally, we put it into the oven. I shared the cake with my family members. It was really delicious. I will never forget that day. 内容得分5’ 内容得分
What is missed in this article?
My trouble
  1. What was your trouble in your study ? (2’)
  2. How did you face the trouble ? (3’)
  3. How did you feel after solving it ? (2’) My spoken English used to be very poor. I tried to improve it, but failed . So I told it to my English teacher and wished him to give me some advice . He told me that I could improve my spoken English by speaking more English. He said, ‘ The more you practice speaking English, the more progress you will make.’ Then I followed his advice and spoke as much English as possible. At last , my spoken English improved .
内容得分5’ 内容得分
What is missed in this article?
Environment around us
  1. What do you think of the environment around us ? (4’)
  2. As students, what should we do ? (3’) The environment is important to us all. We need fresh air, clean water and so on. There used to be many trees around us, the air was fresh and the river was clean, but now they disappeared for one reason or another and were replaced by dirty water and polluted air. Because of the terrible pollution, people’s health is getting worse and worse. What’s more, the green house effect is changing our climate, which may lead to even more serious situation.
内容得分4’ 内容得分
What do you think of this article?
内容不全
The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.
  1. What was the thing you did in the winter holidays ? (1’)
  2. Give some descriptions about it, such as where/when/how /who, etc. (4’)
  3. Why do you think it’s the most unforgettable thing you did? (2’) The winter holidays are one of the most exciting holidays in the year. The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays is making a birthday cake with my mother on my birthday. My mother bought the things we needed from the supermarket. We mixed the flour and eggs, then added some special things to make the cake soft. Finally, we put it into the oven. I shared the cake with my family members. It was really delicious. I will never forget that day. 内容得分5’ 内容得分
What is missed in this article?
My trouble
  1. What was your trouble in your study ? (2’)
  2. How did you face the trouble ? (3’)
  3. How did you feel after solving it ? (2’) My spoken English used to be very poor. I tried to improve it, but failed . So I told it to my English teacher and wished him to give me some advice . He told me that I could improve my spoken English by speaking more English. He said, ‘ The more you practice speaking English, the more progress you will make.’ Then I followed his advice and spoke as much English as possible. At last , my spoken English improved .
内容得分5’ 内容得分
What is missed in this article?
Environment around us
  1. What do you think of the environment around us ? (4’)
  2. As students, what should we do ? (3’) The environment is important to us all. We need fresh air, clean water and so on. There used to be many trees around us, the air was fresh and the river was clean, but now they disappeared for one reason or another and were replaced by dirty water and polluted air. Because of the terrible pollution, people’s health is getting worse and worse. What’s more, the green house effect is changing our climate, which may lead to even more serious situation.
内容得分4’ 内容得分
I want to be an environment protector Nowadays, our environment is becoming worse and worse. Our bad habits cause many problems like air pollution, land pollution and water pollution. To make our environment better, I want to be an environment protector. We can plant trees to make the air clean because trees can take in CO2 and release O2 into the air. We should buy and use environmentally friendly goods. Finally, we mustn’t leave a lot of rubbish into the river, pond or sea. So let’s be environment protectors and enjoy living a better life on the earth.
语言( 分 文采( 分 语言 文采 内容( 分 内容(7分)+语言(8分)+文采(3分) 一、认真审题,结构合理 认真审题,
题目, *写什么 (题目,参考问题) 写什么 题目 参考问题) 提示问题) *重点写什么 (提示问题) 重点写什么 提示问题
I want to be an environment protector Use the following points as a guide.(下列要点仅供参考) 下列要点仅供参考) 下列要点仅供参考 What are the problems of our environment? Why do you want to be an environment protector? What will you do to protect the environment? Nowadays, there are many problems of our environment such as air pollution, water pollution and land pollution. People cut down and burn the forest. People use things once and throw them away. People use chemicals to produce many things. Because of these reasons, our earth is in great danger. We live on the earth, it’s our duty to protect it. I will do a lot of things so that I can protect the earth. For example, I will reuse the plastic bags. There are a lot of ways to be green consumers.

  1. What are the ways to make you happy?
  2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy?
  3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons) Everybody has many ways to make happy. So do I . First, I listen some favorite music. Second, I read some books and make some notes. I think it is good. Third, I play basketball with my friends. In my opinion, play basketball is the best way to make me happy,because I fond of it. Because of those, I become happy and strong.
语言( 分 文采( 分 语言 文采 内容( 分 内容(7分)+语言(8分)+文采(3分) 一、认真审题,结构合理 认真审题,
题目, *写什么 (题目,参考问题) 写什么 题目 参考问题) 提示问题) *重点写什么 (提示问题) 重点写什么 提示问题
*时态 时态
(参考问题) 参考问题) 参考问题
”I want to be an environment protector(保护者 保护者)” 保护者 Use the following points as a guide.(下列要点仅供参考) 下列要点仅供参考) 下列要点仅供参考 What are the problems of our environment? Why do you want to be an environment protector? What will you do to protect the environment?
My trouble
  1. What was your trouble in your study ? (2’)
  2. How did you face the trouble ? (3’)
  3. How did you feel after solving it ? (2’) The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.
  1. What was the thing you did in the winter holidays ? (1’)
  2. Give some descriptions about it, such as where/when/how /who, etc. (4’)
  3. Why do you think it’s the most unforgettable thing you did? (2’) Environment around us
  1. What do you think of the environment around us ? (4’)
  2. As students, what should we do ? (3’)
二、理清思路,列出提纲 理清思路,
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic ”I want to be an environment protector(保护者 保护者)” 保护者 (以”I want to be an environment protector”为题写一 以 为题写一 篇不少于60个词的短文 标点符号不占格。 个词的短文, 篇不少于 个词的短文,标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a guide.(下列要点仅供参考) 下列要点仅供参考) 下列要点仅供参考
  1. What are the problems of our environment?
  2. Why do you want to be an environment protector?
  3. What will you do to protect the environment?
Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy". ( 以“最能使 我快乐的方法”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的 短文,标点符号不占格) The following points are for your reference: (所给提示仅供参考)
  1. What are the ways to make you happy?
  2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy?
  3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)
三、连词成句,初步成形 连词成句, 检查修改, 四、检查修改,内容无误
I want to be an environment protector Environment is very important for us. In our life, the problems of our environment are very important. We have hurt it too much by cutting down trees and pollute water and land. I want to be a environment protector so that save it. I’d suggest my parents to take bus instead of drive car. I will progress my habbits such as use a basket or a paper bag. I will prevent people throw rubbish everywhere. If everybody can do somethings to protect the earth, our environment will be much beautiful.
What do you think of this article?
错误太多
The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays. The winter holidays are one of the most exciting days in the year. I did a lot of things this winter holidays. the most unforgetable thing is to make my birthday cake with my mother on my birthday. My mother buy the things we need from the supermarket. We mixed the floor and eggs. Then add some special things to make the cake soft. Finally, we put it into the iron. I shared the cake with my family numbers. It was real
 

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